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for Won't Let You Go

by Reyn

person jasmin
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! I'm really glad you updated. I'm enjoying the story, and I have to say, it's awesomely twisted.

Great Story.
person dragonlady sakura
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Freaking hilarious! I seriously laughed the whole way through reading this. Great, great, great dialogue and chapter. Can't wait for more.
person Allys
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Tackle glomps the magnificent Reyndor Sama!* I finally log on to AFF after days of sputtering internet service (okay 2 but come on, thats a freakishly long time with no internet. I had a parlay with my service provider this morning). And I find this Goldmine XD. I LOVE YOU REYN!! Thank you so much for updating!! You always crack me up and I'm so freaking happy right now. I loved the description of the office melee it was Awesome, King Kong and Godzilla get special points XD. So does the fax machine for bringing up my favourite part of the last chapter (which I totally had to go back and reread btw). And then there was kissing!! *melts* HAWT KISSING!! *_,*!! *Loves all over you* And then Shika walked in!!! And then Tsuande was in his office XD. This is the greatest comedy of errors I've read since Shakespeare. You Rock my stockings young lady *Beams happy radiant energy right back at ya*. You should write more often XD Go rub up on Kim XD maybe the bug will spread. *waggles eyebrows* MWAH!! ♥ Ja.
person Gwyllion
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really REALLY enjoying this fic so far! Naruto can be such a dummy sometimes, but he's actually a huge sweetheart as a whole. Lol! I seriously can't wait to read what happens next! That last part where he was telling the copy machine story in place of Sasuke was sweet and cute! <333
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE!! You're amazing. <3

Awesome chapter. The lies keep getting bigger! I look forward to see where you're going with this.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! The part between Sakura and Naruto arguing about what Sasuke likes to eat was hilarious but it was also funny with the part about the copy machine! Love the new chapter! :)
person Manda
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! i love this story glad u updated... u have definately got me hooked on Naruto :P can't wait for more!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Noooo! It was getting so good! By the cosmos, do I love the determination which with Sasuke tried to smooth all this over! I especially loved the part when he told Kiba to order him "whatever he thought was more filling" XD keh keh keh...

And the story that Naruto gave as an example about the printer and the ink being directly from a memory with Sasuke...it was simply darling. I hope it meant more than what he let on to believe, that real memory. I hope they eventually realize who they really were meant to be with and stop all these crazy lies D: Good luck with your patience, Sasuke!
person Chishio_rikka
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this stoooorryyy! So glad you updated. Wherever did you get the idea about the copy machine? It was brilliant. And quite hilarious. Hope you update again soon.
Chishio