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for Won't Let You Go

by Reyn

person Allys
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God Reyn... Why don't you write more?? That completely gave me warm and fuzzy feelings throughout. It was funny and sweet and perfect *huggles*. I love how you're building up the "romance" between Naruto and Sasuke as something that was just always there that neither one of them has really realised. Although I have my suspicions about Naruto knowing, but Sasuke is obviously adorably clueless. And poor Sakura may be falling at least into like with Naruto and Kiba's been hinting about interesting happenings that m,ay have had some revelations about sexuality that Sasuke's totally comfortable to be in complete denial of XD. Honestly it's a pretty masterful weaving of a story honey. This is such a fantastic story. Really, why don't you write more?? *huggles you* I miss you but I should back in full commission soon *crosses fingers and hopes*. And OMG!! THANK YOU for extending the dealine again!!! I have some really cute ideas and absolutely no time but damn, I;m determined now. *sighs* I was determined before *headdesk* Anyway sugar Thank you loads, for the update and the extension. Luff you ♥
person beautifullove348
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! Uber cute. Get rid of the Sakura and start the Naruto Sasuke lovin'! Just kidding. The story is moving along perfectly, I love your writing. The plot is interesting and esciting.

Please continue soon!
person Kimra
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. :D
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story is awesome! It's always great to see these characters in different settings like this and I love a story that has an actual plot! I hope you update soon, 'cause I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
squee! i <3 it!!!
person ari
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and can't wait to see where you go with it (sounds cliche, but I do mean it!). The humor is great, the plot entertaining - I loved Kakashi's snide remarks on the awkward sleeping positions as well as how touchy he was about naruto being insulted. The overall characterization was great.
Seriously...I laughed so hard I cried.
person Empress
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! Not only is your writing terrific, the scenes utterly hilarious and the characters great, but you’re taking your time in actually establishing a plot. The fact that you didn’t have them screwing each other senseless at the end of the first chapter definitely appeals to me. Not to say I don’t like my fair share of smut and I’ll certainly be looking forward to when they finally do find their way into the bedroom (or on top of a table if it’s more convenient) but it’s nice to see you let them grow as characters a little first.

Keep going darling, I’ll be hanging onto your every word! You have the Empress’ two thumbs up. ;D
person dutsada
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are the best! this is a great story and i can't wait for the next one!
person moose
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is great and the plot is good and i uh was sorta craving some action during naru's drunkiness but lol update sooner! this is truly an interesting story! i need to get that book you based this on hmmm....well anyways you are truly a good writer and i'll wait for however long it takes you to update...i always check here for any good updates so i'll be watching this!!! lol so dont forget it!!!!! *does creepy face* muahahahahaha!
person Allys
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You're back! *Glomps* not that you really went anywhere but lol, you're writing again - Yay XD!! And why have you never posted these drawings??? hmmm, I'm curious now. This was a great chapter, I basically lmao the entire way through XD. It's gonna be really interesting seeing you get two characters together who both seem to swear they're not gay, lol. But that little scenario/debacle in the morning (after ;)) was priceless. The boge's both fell asleep on the couch, and snuggled XD *muahahaha* And oh god this entire chapter is just setting up craziness. Maybe I should go find that book XD. And Oh, :D, does this mean we'll be seeing more of Kiba?? And what when Neji comes to town? LOL, haven't forgotten him. Here's hoping you update again soon *Throws you some cyber cookies, and expensive champagne* (LOL, yeah I went back and read the whole thing again, I really do love this story) Thank you so much for the update love ♥.