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An update!! So glad to see that your going to continue with this story. Plot before porn is great and not always present on this site. Can't wait to see how Naruto and Sasuke develope their relationship. The ;unch date should be amusing as well. Please keep updating.
Chishio

Just wanted to say that I'm loving the story so far! It seems a bit simple now, but there are hints about a deeper plot going on, so I'll be sticking around. That and I love the way you write Sasuke and Naruto, and your writing style in general. I don't much like Sakura, but I don't like her character much either. Iruka and Kakashi seem in-character as well, but I really want to know more about their relationship with Naruto.

Holy fucking cow. YOU UPDATED!!! I don't have time to read -__________________________- I just wanted to let you know how excited I am that you updated. Seriously, am on a happy whoa high right now, your fic is one of my favourites because its just so damn funny and amazing etc. Erm.. sorry for fangirling at you! I have something to look forward to when I get home tonight :D:D:D

*falls over* ok so I couldn’t wait to read this *has no self control* This entire chapter had me in hysterics. From Godzilla to the Kakashi-Iruka conversation, just everything. I love Kakashi. “Ah. Are you Naruto’s mistress, then?” *falls over again* your sense of humor is brilliant, and you write it incredibly well. I want to overload you with compliments and fangirliness but I think that might scare you, or well you’ve probably already run away XD

Naruto ranting about his senseis is so cute

I cannot believe that your deranged mind led you to have Sasuke’s fake boyfriend to be Kiba. That is such a Naruto thing to do! Stop digging yourself in deeper Naruto!!! *snickers* pure genius.

I don’t think anyone was OOC at all; in fact they were really IC. I like that Sakura wasn’t all fawny over Sasuke. Though liking her is gonna make it all that much more difficult to get to the NaruSasuNaru loving XD probably means you’ve got a choke load of angst up your sleeve. *unsuspecting reader*

I find the idea of Naruto trying to skip town so damn funny, it’s such a cute image too. For once it’s Sasuke chasing. Sasuke ranting about Naruto is pretty good. This whole fic is complete love. I hope you carry on writing and updating, this chapter was well worth the wait ^_^ Thank you for brightening up my day :D:D (the creepy stalker fangirlness stops now, I swear! ^_^"""")

Ooooh I really like this story lol, I loved how Iruka-sensei and Kaka-sensei were when they found Naruto asleep on the couch with Sasuke it made me grin XD but I can't wait to see how this is gonna go, I think its gonna be very hard for Sakura of all people to pretend she's actually in love with Naruto lol - the smiles she'll paste on her face will probably be the fakest smiles ever seen XD and I love that Sasuke rants non-stop about Naruto without even realizing it!!! Anyway, love ti so far!

Hina xXxx

It was too short for such the long wait :( But ah well! A great story like this DOES take time! I absolutely love it! Poor Naruto! I wonder how him and Sasuke will get together? Please continue the amazing writing style and creativity when continuing this story! Please make it soon, I don't think I can stand the wait :P

Cute story so far. I personally prefer the plot development first, and you're doing such a good job at keeping the readers guessing at how the two of them will get together in the end. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp

This is really good, keep up the good work and updates!

I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work. (Its sort of hard to think of Iruka as a yazuka personality wise, but then again, outside of the ninja world when you think about it, both ninjas would look like some pretty shady characters so it makes sense. ^^ hehe.)

Really good! Im really looking forward to the next chapter! I really like sasuke's character. Listening to his thoughts is hilarious! I also loved Naruto and his encounter with the elevator. Hahaha aah... I really enjoyed the story so far and I really am looking forward to reading more.