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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ waits like a puppy getting food, for more of the story.
I some what like where this story is heading but some of Narutos logic seems a bit flawed, but before I say something I would regret I want to read more. Its a very interesting story and quite different from what I've read in this section thus far.
I some what like where this story is heading but some of Narutos logic seems a bit flawed, but before I say something I would regret I want to read more. Its a very interesting story and quite different from what I've read in this section thus far.
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. (for all the times you did that to me. here's your share!)
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 Review
-Part of me wants there to not be any "definite" partner for Hinata (as a side pairing obviously), but it would be nice to insinuate (heavily, lol) that there's something between Neji and her. Hmmm.
-Great line: “And this!” Naruto proceeded to unbuckle his buckle his pants. “This can definitely-!”
-You know, I noticed in this chapter that your style is incorporating a bit of my own (like you're "giving in to your inner Dembo" XXD), what with all the ongoing sentences and 'messages' in parenthesis! XD That's so awesome.
-I liked this chapter a lot! It was really funny!
I hope you update again!
-DM
-Part of me wants there to not be any "definite" partner for Hinata (as a side pairing obviously), but it would be nice to insinuate (heavily, lol) that there's something between Neji and her. Hmmm.
-Great line: “And this!” Naruto proceeded to unbuckle his buckle his pants. “This can definitely-!”
-You know, I noticed in this chapter that your style is incorporating a bit of my own (like you're "giving in to your inner Dembo" XXD), what with all the ongoing sentences and 'messages' in parenthesis! XD That's so awesome.
-I liked this chapter a lot! It was really funny!
I hope you update again!
-DM
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fyi.. its 'kampai' when they are toasting.. not banzai.. but then we could just chalk it up to Naru being drunk.. but then.. why is he actually able to make decent convo? not bad.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish this would get updated :(
its such a brilliant story
its such a brilliant story
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You haven't updated in so long! Why?
Anyway, I re-read it...again! This is like the fourth time, I think. It still makes me laugh so much, like a loon. Drnk-Naruto is something I've decided I like very much. Especially the bit where he couldn't even say "bartender and where he told Sasuke that he was engaged to him, [LMAO]!! That was deep hysterics! Nearly pissed my panties! O-kay, you have to update soon! No "minor edits" - update!
By the way, I didn't really find anything different...where did you edit? _(O.o)_
Ki`Tara
Anyway, I re-read it...again! This is like the fourth time, I think. It still makes me laugh so much, like a loon. Drnk-Naruto is something I've decided I like very much. Especially the bit where he couldn't even say "bartender and where he told Sasuke that he was engaged to him, [LMAO]!! That was deep hysterics! Nearly pissed my panties! O-kay, you have to update soon! No "minor edits" - update!
By the way, I didn't really find anything different...where did you edit? _(O.o)_
Ki`Tara
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome. You gotta love a drunk Naruto. I like how you made out their rivalry. Lots of stories get confused and end up making a half assed and unrealistic love-hate relationship between Susuke and Naruto. You did perfectly.
I hope you manage to update this soon. I realize life and other stories get in the way. But this tory rocks XD its one of my favorites ^^ Please update soon and great job!
I hope you manage to update this soon. I realize life and other stories get in the way. But this tory rocks XD its one of my favorites ^^ Please update soon and great job!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so ashamed of myself for not reading this when I first saw it. So far this story is wonderful. I love the way you portray Naruto (even if he is drunk) If I knew someone who behaved that way when they got drunk we would hit the bar every weekend!
The first two chapters give you that "Hmm I wonder what's going to happen" feeling, not to mention make you laugh uncontrobably.
"His new goal now was to drink until he could no longer remember even the size of his own penis (which, given the fact that he tended to measure it at least once a week out of boredom, was a hard thing to forget)." Because I am a perve I loved this line! Hell, I loved everything about this story. You have them both very in character, down to the playstation in Naruto's office...come on, Naruto would definitely have one! LOL
The descriptions you give are very detailed and vivid. I could picture the messy office Sasuke walked into, and the scene where Naruto was just about stripping in front of Sasuke was to die for! An emotinal drunk Naruto is FUN!
Anyway, you have gained a loyaly reader and reviewer. I can't wait for the next update!
~Animehead
The first two chapters give you that "Hmm I wonder what's going to happen" feeling, not to mention make you laugh uncontrobably.
"His new goal now was to drink until he could no longer remember even the size of his own penis (which, given the fact that he tended to measure it at least once a week out of boredom, was a hard thing to forget)." Because I am a perve I loved this line! Hell, I loved everything about this story. You have them both very in character, down to the playstation in Naruto's office...come on, Naruto would definitely have one! LOL
The descriptions you give are very detailed and vivid. I could picture the messy office Sasuke walked into, and the scene where Naruto was just about stripping in front of Sasuke was to die for! An emotinal drunk Naruto is FUN!
Anyway, you have gained a loyaly reader and reviewer. I can't wait for the next update!
~Animehead
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! ^^ I'm so happy you updated!! At least more of Naruto's whole screwed up situation has been explained. I love the plot, and I love the way they don't just jump in bed with each other after the first paragraph. I'm looking forward to seeing how their whole relationship develops.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I've really enjoyed your story so far and can't wait to read more. You've taken an interesting approach to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship and I really want to see how it develops. At this point I'm guessing there's more to his quitting than Naruto is letting on? How will Sakura react when she finds out about Naruto's lie? I can't wait to see! (: