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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, when is the actio between those two going to start up? Is Sasuke going to make the moves or is Naruto?
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm really liking this story, it flows so easily within your writing.
Its odd, but I can *see* this happening, and its funny as hell, with Naruto being drunk and all xD
I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Even though I hate SasuSaku with a passion, I understand what you did with her here.
Plus it doesn't seem as though Sasuke likes her too much anyways~
Wow, the part I just had to burst out laughing was when Naruto was flexing, and then wanting to take off his pants xDD
At first when I read the beginning chapter, I was reconsidering reading this... at first it seem rushed and squished to me somehow.
But I'm glad I read the second chapter because it was alot better and it explained about the rushed things in the first.
Like I said before, PLEASE update soon!
^^
Its odd, but I can *see* this happening, and its funny as hell, with Naruto being drunk and all xD
I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Even though I hate SasuSaku with a passion, I understand what you did with her here.
Plus it doesn't seem as though Sasuke likes her too much anyways~
Wow, the part I just had to burst out laughing was when Naruto was flexing, and then wanting to take off his pants xDD
At first when I read the beginning chapter, I was reconsidering reading this... at first it seem rushed and squished to me somehow.
But I'm glad I read the second chapter because it was alot better and it explained about the rushed things in the first.
Like I said before, PLEASE update soon!
^^
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love drunk Naruto. This is an awesome story. Superbly written, good character development, and a vice like focus on Naruto and Sasuke. I read the flame and my first thought was: "What's up with YOU? YOU suck butt." I have a very intellectually stunted five-year-old sense of humor/fighting. Regardless, whoever sent that obviously didn't read your story. Or is too stupid to leave any meaningful kind of comment. Screw them.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it and I love Kiba. LOL
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I've been waiting forever for this update!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:(
update this please?
pretty please?
*hands you naruto plushie*
no?
*hands you sasuke plushie*
still no?
*hands you naruto and sasuke plushies doint it chibi style*
:D
update this please?
pretty please?
*hands you naruto plushie*
no?
*hands you sasuke plushie*
still no?
*hands you naruto and sasuke plushies doint it chibi style*
:D
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER
i love your sasuke, he makes me smirk
:D
did you update because i gave you chibi!naruto and chibi!sasuke doing it?
probably not, but i'm gonna keep thinking you'll update in response to bribes XD
this story brings out the 13 year older inner fangirl in me.
your naruto is very IC and he didnt come off high, i loved the elevator bit!! and the tea bit! and the car bit! crap! i just loved the whole thing! i'm gonna go look for you on FF.net now and see your other stories there
you write humour SO WELL, its not those overdone fanfics where the humour is pushed out to a ridiculous point
this has the perfect amount of humour and plot
great work!
i wont beg for an update (yet) because i feel bad that you're overworked!!!
*gives cookies* because you're awesome!
i love your sasuke, he makes me smirk
:D
did you update because i gave you chibi!naruto and chibi!sasuke doing it?
probably not, but i'm gonna keep thinking you'll update in response to bribes XD
this story brings out the 13 year older inner fangirl in me.
your naruto is very IC and he didnt come off high, i loved the elevator bit!! and the tea bit! and the car bit! crap! i just loved the whole thing! i'm gonna go look for you on FF.net now and see your other stories there
you write humour SO WELL, its not those overdone fanfics where the humour is pushed out to a ridiculous point
this has the perfect amount of humour and plot
great work!
i wont beg for an update (yet) because i feel bad that you're overworked!!!
*gives cookies* because you're awesome!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is why i started reading AU fics. :D love how this is going. i dunno how the two would develop into an item but i'm willing to read through the development. :D keep it up!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay lol this story is so good!! udapted fast pleasE
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey
Wow...I'm pretty impressed with this story. It's down right freakin' hilarious!! ^O^!! The witty comments leave me falling off my chair lol. I'm very interested in seeing where this is going especially seeing as how Naruto was obviously not thinking too clearly with his supposed "elaborate lie" lmao. I truly am enjoying this story. Can't wait to see what's to come!!
Wow...I'm pretty impressed with this story. It's down right freakin' hilarious!! ^O^!! The witty comments leave me falling off my chair lol. I'm very interested in seeing where this is going especially seeing as how Naruto was obviously not thinking too clearly with his supposed "elaborate lie" lmao. I truly am enjoying this story. Can't wait to see what's to come!!