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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved boys and their toys part 1 and part 2 is just as good.
I would dearly love to see a part 3. Itachi and impending fatherhood is a fascinating combination.
I noticed you have introduced the notion that Naruto and Sakura were lovers in part 2. Does this mean that Naruto will play a role later?
I love your work... please keep writing your excellent stories.
I would dearly love to see a part 3. Itachi and impending fatherhood is a fascinating combination.
I noticed you have introduced the notion that Naruto and Sakura were lovers in part 2. Does this mean that Naruto will play a role later?
I love your work... please keep writing your excellent stories.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, you always have unique plots! I love your writing style!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes PLEASE write more! It's so good, particularly because it breaks the norms for Itachi and Sakura stories. This is the best ItaSaku I've read in a while.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I think you should continue. Excellent storyline goin' there. Quacky quack, said the Gerbil. XD
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story, i like it. More please
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAA I want more please
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update hurry...poor sakura....i like the fact that u made sakura feel guilty and that she hates herself bc of what she is doing...most saku/ita fics dont even let put up a struggle or have her feel guilty about what she is doing (your fic makes it seem more real this way)....are you gonna have chapters with naruto, maybe some flashbacks i don't want naruto to get hurt, if it had been sasuke i wouldn't have given a crap that she was sleeping with itachi, but since it's naruto, he dosen't deserve being uphappy. let it work out in the end please :)
update soon!!!
update soon!!!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that your writting has not gotten rusty.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good! can't wait for what happens on the next chapter, so update soon!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see another chapter! It's a very interesting and well-written story. And the way it's been written, it could go any number of ways, but I'm partial to seeing a relationship develop between Itachi and Sakura that is a true relationship. You made it seem like he could fall in love with her and with a little change in his behavior she could fall for him. But anyway you go about it, I'm sure it will be wonderful! Eagerly awaiting the next part! Hugs & Kisses!