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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person Izzy
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lalalalaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! omg!! i loooove you!! heres some cookies...wait no, lemme have one.., just a few more, oops sry! i'll have to make u some more XD a cookie crumb! *hissssssss* =D great job looking forward to chapie 15!! keep up the good work, no great work, no FANTASTIC'O!! ;3
person Shika172
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tenten Hinata and Choji unpaired. Well we cant have that. here is an idea repeat "IDEA" pair up the Tenten with Kankuro yay i mean seriously it could work Tenten loves her wepons Kankuro loves the multi wepons in his puppets (they can bond over weponry) and Tenten is to much a cutie to leave unpaired. As for Hinata slap her with the Choji. It will be original thats for sure cause i dont belive ive seen a HinaxCho before and they both have that slight depression stuff in their pasts. That leaves 1 char doesnt it WHAT ABOUT TEMARI. When it comes to Temari I have no clue what works
person Fourthiv
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my, I am so glad for this update! :giggles: I love this story so far, you do such a good job with it! I wish I had the ability to write more than a one shot. But, sadly, I can never complete a multi-chapter story [thats generally because I can only write at specific times, and i usually have about 20 story plots going on at once in my head, and only one of those is ever actually written, if that] So anyways, great job! I cant wait to read more! :hands you a cookie:
person Savin-me
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I’m glad that I was able to help you and not even knowing that you weren’t plotting this ^^
So finally he was busted, heheh XD I thought he will be masked longer, oh well it’s not a problem with me ^^ Naruto is kind of lucky that Sakura was merciful to him and he hadn’t the same faith as Kiba XD

Loved this chapter and still waiting for more ^^
person HellzAngel
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, his friends finally know who he is. Oh, I loved when Tsunade threw ero-sennin out the window. I always vision him flying through the sky, a pained expression on his face. Anyway, nice chapter.

Can't wait till the next chapter, hope it's soon.
person Hello
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this update. So funny with Jiraiya being bullied and all. He he, I cracked. So excited for next update.
person cfox
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a nice chapter and I'm glad to see that Naruto can out mind fight Ino. I would look forward to when Sasuke gets into Narutos mind as he can surperss the Nine tails as seen in the 300s chapter with that anoying Sai. That would be a fun battle. Hope to see more of Sasuke soon and as for pairs I think Hinta and Kiba, Shino and Tenten, and Neji and Garra, You could find some way to make it work and of course Naruto and SasUke after all Sasuke has uke in his name.
person Tara
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reviewing muh story, yura-chan! So sorry I aint reviwed yours in a while, gomen! But because of that I had so much to read. I'm getting use to the grammar too because when I was reading I didn't even notice it! Ha-zar!

You know who I vote for?
Because Sasuke is not yet in Konoha, I want a little Naru x Neji action! Yeah! Or Gaara x Naru! Or BOTH of them! Oh wait...what about Kaka x Naru, now I don't see that very often, you know?

1)Naru x Neji

2)Gaa x Naru

3)Kaka x Naru

In order of choice.
I'll be back to leave a longer review. lol, coz I know you like 'em!

Ja Ne,
Tenshi Lee a.k.a Tara
person trulywicked
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pairings? Hmmm I vote NejiGaara, KibaHinata, ShikamaruIno, ShinoTenTen, and I'm a HUGE fan of KakaIru.
kay now on to the actual review. In chapter 12 did I see Sasuke possibly figuring out that Naruto is really alive? Hmm guess I'll find out in a later chapter. Tsunade's being a little sadistic ne? Putting Naruto in a furisode(snickers) but it certainally is working to his advantage isn't it. Man that thing with Ino was close, I almost freaked out. Does Neji suspect Kaji's real identity? It seemed like he might. I'm salivating for your next chapter. Keep up the excellent work oh writer-sama.
BTW do you have an account on fanfiction.net?
person ann dragera
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, i want a sasunaru

but as to other pairings - one i like and hardly find is hinata/neji or hinata/kiba.
i personally like temari and shikamaru!

anyone ever consider a neji/gaara?

patiently waiting for the next chapter. So write on!