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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person ching1
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems like you're having fun with all these wild jutsus and they are quite entertaining. Naruto has become so stong and it looks like Sasuke should switch sensai soon. Great job! -- ching1
person orchidee
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gamakichi!!!! yayyy!~

flying!naruto sounds pretty darn sexy! ;)
person Rho
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ This chapter was very cute. I love the interaction between Yuki and Naruto, and it seems as though you are making up for what Naruto never had by bringing in the little fox as a sibling. Also, ero-senin is about as close to a father(aside from Iruka) that Naruto as ever had and you are doing a good job of showing that bond. I was wondering if you were going to use Naru-chan's "special" jutsu in this or not. xD Poor Jiraiya would die of heart failure if both Yuki AND Naruto used it! ^^ But...that would mean that he would need to recover from the frog prank first lol. Overall, I liked this chapter because of the bonding that appeared in it. Wonderful job and I am looking forward to your next update!
person trulywicked
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha(takes a deep breath)hahahahahahahahaha! That was brilliantly hilarious! Jiraya certainly got his comeupance for his pervyness. I love the sense of family comraderie in this chapter. I'm really looking forward to when they get to Suna it'll be so much fun. Until the next chapter be happy, be healthy, and look out for divebombing turkeys. Ja ne!
person mike~
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thx for the update!

this chapter was really hilarious =) the prank brings back memories of how naruto was like when he was younger. im just glad that althou naruto's matured, he's still the fun-lovin genin from before!

can't wait for next chapter, i'll be crossing my fingers for some sasuke action!
person Fourthiv
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I'm so glad you updated this story. This had to have been one of the funniest chapters so far. Great job! Update more soon!! <(^_^<) (>^_^)> <(^_^)>
person HellzAngel
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant chapter. Naruto and Yuki's interaction is very cute, and the prank they played was priceless. I can see it so clearly. I laughed very hard. Can't wait until we have some Gaara interaction. Hope to see another chapter soon. It keeps me enterained.

Oh and to the question, I think Naruto being able to fly would be awesome.
person feisu
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey :3

I loved this one :3 few more days until the uploads, but there will be two chapters if everything goes right :3 update :D
person Naru_seme
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved it! Please update soon! Can't wait to read more with Sasuke and Naruto!
person cfox
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was great it is always good to see Jirya get his just deserets for being such a pervert. I like how you are going , and I will take your word that Sasuke will get better soon. Great funny chapter by the way looking forward to more soon.