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I loved it and if there is another one of these that are blank just ignore it because my damn pinkie hit the enter key...anyways....that was excelent brilliant and I am looking foward to more :) *mumbles to self* 'stupied keyboard'

S'okay I got the Masamune thing now. When I read your note on Kagero I was reeeeally confused at first but then I checked out the wikipedia link. I, unfortunately, have no access to the anime beyond cartoon network and the uncut box set so I don't know much about anime only characters. On to the actual review, awesome sword seriously AWESOME sword(pictures Naruto with the sword and drools)Sorry I have a thing for bladed weaponry. Sasuke getting stuck in the Swamp of the Underworld Jutsu up to his neck made me laugh, talk about dignity armageddon(snickers) and I love the more noble, shall we say, use of Jiraya's peeping jutsu. Snake-slime's gonna be pissed when he finds out about Kagero's failure(does happy dance cause I love when Orochimaru's plans get stymied) Personally I'm all for a flying Naruto, it'll make it easier for him to get around not to mention the benefit in battle. Keep up the great work Oh wonderous writer-sama.

i love ur story!

i love the way you describe naruto in your fic; it always leaves my skin w/ goosebumps when i think about how potentially strong naruto can be in the near future. i really like how you're allowing naruto to slowly learn about his new abilities, instead of gaining it all at once.

i like how naruto hides his identity, i hope it stays that way until further on. my heart seems to stop everytime yuki calls out naruto by his given name; i keep thinking that sasuke would be nearby and pick up on that hint!

can't wait for your next chapter!

Wow! This is really great thus far!
It's soooooo good to have a new plot line, and thank goodness, someone who actually knows a bit about Japanese mythology.
Thank you, also, for going through and defining terms and historical figures (that was a surprise!) that most folks wouldn't know (I'm enough of an anthropology and linguistics dork that I knew most of it, except for some of the things coming from the anime itself, which I'm still slogging through (no more filler episodes, please?))
Can't wait to see how this plays out!

just got done reading them all, you just gotta continue with the probable romance! ^^ So what will this end with, i wonder??

This is my first naruto fic, and i am truly enjoying it! I love the AU elements (especially the creation of a much more yummmy naruto.) hee-hee! please update soon! :)

it's coming along nicely. the only little thing i found wrong was kagerou. in the episodes i've watched, the shinobi was referred to as a "he", even by his companions. there are plenty of feminine guys running around so i think this falls into that category. also in that "butterfly" form there are no female breasts, trust me i looked.

What a nice story to find and a nice take on the timeslip. My only complaint is that you seem to be making Sasuke a bit to helplesss and useless. I would think he would be a little bit stronger then you have portrayed him. If he is going to be the uke in the relation ship , he could be a little stronger as I would think that Naruto would wan't an equel mate not a push-over.

Other then that small complaint it looks like a good story and I can't wait for more.

thankyou for writing it.

hey hey hey :D

Love this one as well. Kagero huh? I was listening to Gackt & Chachamaru - Kagero lol when I started on the story. One of my fav songs woot. anyways, keep updating :3 I'm not sure if you wanna know or not but my story will be updated soon with the 6th chapter. you said you loved it, so i though i give you a notice so you can be ready lol enjoy :D

ps: it might take a few days.

Another cool chapter and I was right...the katana sounds cool (I love katana's). A bit of action and more interation with Sasuke. I'm as dedicated to this story as when I was when I read the first chapter. Cannot wait until the next chapter comes. Hope it's soon.