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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person Tara
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah he should totally learn how to fly! Jumping through tree branches, even with his kind of speed, must be degrading, lol.
Again, Nice chapter! Can't wait till you update!
....And when they reach Konoha! I'm all gitty but patience is a virtue, ne? He'll have the boys shitting their pants and the girls...well...*mischevious glint in eyes*
Sayanora!

(Wow, for once I didn't have the urge/need to leave some over long review that you'll propably fall asleep half way through reading it! It's a miracle I tell you! I'm healed!...I think.)
person Fourthiv
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better. I love the katana you made for Naruto, very cool! I cant wait to read more, the story is getting so exciting. Great job!
person blisblop
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Redeemed,why kill him then(wink).
person Fourthiv
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
blarge! Update soon! I wanna find out what this mystery thing is.
person trulywicked
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Itachi's gonna be redeemed! Oooooooo I wonder what Jiraya had forged for Naruto? Oh well I'll find out next chapter. The smithy's name rings a distant bell but I can't quite fish out the information. I love this fic, it's so incredible. Oh yeah, did you know that another term for the infinite vision Naruto has is remote viewing? I read about it in a Dean Koontz novel. Keep up the great work, I look forward to the next chapter.
person Cindy
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and yes, please redeem Itachi (for Sasuke's sake) and make it a really long one, like 50 chapters... ;) Thanks!
person Passing Reader
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like Naruto's new look! ;p Sometimes its hard to vizualize but its uber neat once I get the picture in my head ^-^ Awsome plot line cant wait to see what happends next!
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tara here in all her log-in glory. Can't wait for the "surprises" in the next few chapters! I have to say though...Gaara saw Naruto right? It's just a bit freaky but was he in like a ghost form floating or did he look normal?

ps: Spread Gaara love through out the world!!

pss: Spread Naru/Gaa and Naru/Sasu love through out the universe!!

lol, I'm being stupid again...forgive me! *bows deeply with hands clasped in a prayer position*
Green tea with a bit of mint should do the trick!
Ja ne!
person Naru_seme
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Hope you update soon!
person Anna
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I love you, and your story!

You're an awesome chief!