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Yay, new chapters! ^^ -does a happy dance-I can see that you are improving your grammer quite a bit! I didn't catch any errors at all. ^^ I am also glad to see that you aren't rushing things, especially as far as Sasuke is concerned. Naru-chan is such a bad ass in this story and normally it is pretty hard to pull off, but you have managed it nicely. I love how you are develpoing his character and abilities. Huzzah! -cheers- I am faithfully awaiting your next update! ^_^

PS: I still need to scan that pic >< I will do something special for you since it is taking me so long.

Fantastic...lol loved it your a great writer

wow O_O

wow, *tear* i could never write something this great!!!!! it's so...so...so...god omfg oh so smexy, only way to say it XD keep up the updates and i'm loving it so far!!! sense ur so great at discribing people and things, that last part is a real cliff hanger, but just a suggestion, maybe u could describe the area a bit more? like, well it is the rock country so duh there's gonna be rocks, but how bout...like colors, theres lots of rocks that have colors, and maybe buildings can be made out of the more expensive kimd because they must have everykind there!!! hehe but what do i know, i just really like ur story so far!! i don't really know ow it could get any better, and keep up the great work!!! i feel so proud of myself, usally i write one word replys, but this time because i RRRREALLLY love it, i'm gonna be extra nice a write a big long one!!!hahahaha and don't know if it's a gift or a curse for someone to read my drabbles like this XP

Yay, another great chapter. The story is progressing and I can't wait to find out what Naruto's present is, although, I can probably guess. It's actually a refreshing change to have Naruto not return straight to Konoha, like most stories. The suspension will in the end be worth the wait, when he finally arrives home, and everyone sees Naruto.

Anyway, please update soon. Love your story very much.

love the story. ok so it's a little late for me to say that Itachi should not be redeemed. i love him but don't think h should be redeemed. it would be to out of character. love how the story is going. like your work. yay.
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hey sorry i used a name somebody already used well my review has the weird things on it like the
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(=^o^=) on it. sorry didn't know, sorry (T-T) keep up the good job.

I'd love to see Itachi gain redemption. Personally I don't think Itachi actually killed his clan. The Sharigan can for someone to see a false "Truth" that appears reallistic. By the way, love the story. Keep up the good work!

laaaaa so good :3

whats redemmed mean? it's on the tip of my tong,,,dammit!!!