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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hum, I like the idea. I love the pairing (NaruSasu is hot, imo. ...and Sasuke in the manga looks just like his mom, so yeah XD;. I can totally see him looking like a girl so Win.) But, Sasuke... I'd think he'd feel a little more violated with that illusion. Considering the only other illusions he's encountered was Itachi with his mind f-ck powers. I thought he'd be slightly more defensive. But, yay! More reading!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey :3
I'm glad you liked my story. :3 I'm very lazy to update lol. I have some ideas, but I have to get in the mood to write. I draw more SasuNaru-NaruSasu these days. Anyways, I like this chapter as well :3 Giving you advice? I like everything you wrote, there is nothing to change I think, and unless your mind is empty of ideas what to write for the story, write your own and don't ask for advices. It is very hard to write something that is already not written by someone else, in a different way. There are so many stories, that people might think you steal from them, but no, you just got some ideas of them on your own but you are changing them and stuff. Well, don't let people get to you lol. Write what's on your mind.
ps: sorry if I made some mistakes lol. Still learning english.
ps2: UPDATE!!! :D
faith aka feisu
I'm glad you liked my story. :3 I'm very lazy to update lol. I have some ideas, but I have to get in the mood to write. I draw more SasuNaru-NaruSasu these days. Anyways, I like this chapter as well :3 Giving you advice? I like everything you wrote, there is nothing to change I think, and unless your mind is empty of ideas what to write for the story, write your own and don't ask for advices. It is very hard to write something that is already not written by someone else, in a different way. There are so many stories, that people might think you steal from them, but no, you just got some ideas of them on your own but you are changing them and stuff. Well, don't let people get to you lol. Write what's on your mind.
ps: sorry if I made some mistakes lol. Still learning english.
ps2: UPDATE!!! :D
faith aka feisu
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, there are some minor grammar mistakes but they don't distract too bad from the story. I'd like to see Itachi redemed before his death, but that's just me. If you email when a story is updated then please add me to the list!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! I loved it! It was funny at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is getting better and better. I really like it. I cant wait to read more!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked your story, it's turning out pretty good. Ihope you update soon. and Kaji(Naruto) sounds really really hot.;)
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
- YOSH! You updated! Am I ever glad!
It's just so funny when Naruto is being chased by RFGs (rabid-fan girls) lol. It's kawaii too. But what's his beef, shouldn't he be basking in all his smexiness gloriness? He should take on the nonchalant act and ignore them all together instead of worrying his pretty lil' ass by running. That must be so de-grading. Can't wait to see more of him and Sasuke though.
- And also my lil' kawaii kitsune, yuki!! I love the lil' man...fox...whateva...he's just so AWESOME!
- I wouldn't mind a fighting scene with Naruto and one of Orochimaru's minions so Sasuke can see how strong he really is and fall head over heels before he realizes what's happening! *starts getting giddy with anticipation*
AARRGH! Can't wait till you update again!! Counting the minutes!
- And the time that they'd actually reach Konoha!! Will you give me the benefit in hoping that the boys there (namely Neji. I love Naru/Neji pairups!) will think he was actually a girl (you know, with the long hair and all) and go all out to try and get his attention? Even if it's slight, I think it'd be pretty cool to see a bit of Naru/Neji. Even if Naruto is strictly Sasuke's property (at least Sasuke thinks he is, ne?) I just love to see Jealous smexy boys fighting over Naruto and the best choice is Neji and Sasuke then Sasuke and Gaara. *shakes head sympathetically* Don't mind me. I'm just sprouting off at the mouth...or in this case, fingers...with my seemingly good ideas *bounces eyebrows inquiringly* yet they're annoying. Yare-yare...
UPDATE SOON!! *starts to jog on the spot to release some pent up energy and gidiness*
It's just so funny when Naruto is being chased by RFGs (rabid-fan girls) lol. It's kawaii too. But what's his beef, shouldn't he be basking in all his smexiness gloriness? He should take on the nonchalant act and ignore them all together instead of worrying his pretty lil' ass by running. That must be so de-grading. Can't wait to see more of him and Sasuke though.
- And also my lil' kawaii kitsune, yuki!! I love the lil' man...fox...whateva...he's just so AWESOME!
- I wouldn't mind a fighting scene with Naruto and one of Orochimaru's minions so Sasuke can see how strong he really is and fall head over heels before he realizes what's happening! *starts getting giddy with anticipation*
AARRGH! Can't wait till you update again!! Counting the minutes!
- And the time that they'd actually reach Konoha!! Will you give me the benefit in hoping that the boys there (namely Neji. I love Naru/Neji pairups!) will think he was actually a girl (you know, with the long hair and all) and go all out to try and get his attention? Even if it's slight, I think it'd be pretty cool to see a bit of Naru/Neji. Even if Naruto is strictly Sasuke's property (at least Sasuke thinks he is, ne?) I just love to see Jealous smexy boys fighting over Naruto and the best choice is Neji and Sasuke then Sasuke and Gaara. *shakes head sympathetically* Don't mind me. I'm just sprouting off at the mouth...or in this case, fingers...with my seemingly good ideas *bounces eyebrows inquiringly* yet they're annoying. Yare-yare...
UPDATE SOON!! *starts to jog on the spot to release some pent up energy and gidiness*
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant looking foward to the next one :) and thanks for emailing me with the update!!!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your doing very well indeed, this story is fan-fricking-tastic. Loved this chapter, and Yuki is very cute, loved the interaction between him and Naruto. The Sasuke moments were great too, very Sasuke-like. Umm, the Itachi question, it's hard. I do like Itachi, so I think maybe he should be redeemed. Anyway, please update soon, I can't wait until he gets back to Konoha, and see the reactions of his friends, its gonna be very cool. Hope to see you soon, ja ne.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Being as I love Itachi in all his Itachiness I'd like for him to be redeemed. As always I love this chapter. Yuki's sooo cute! Stupid ero-sennin needs a swift kick in the rear. Can't wait for the next chapter.