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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person MissMayumi
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I hope Sasuke can figure out that man is Naruto! I would love for them to become lovers..hehhe...maybe even some Mpreg!!..ehehehe...thanks yura! I loe your betaing for my stories! and No your not bad!!
person MissMayumi
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omgsh! Chapter 3! that kicked ass! I love how Sasuke finally realized he was just a pawn! But I don't want him to die! Sasuke is too special! Don't let Orochimaru take over him!!
person Nyuchan
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your answer ;-)

person trulywicked
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(roasting Orochimaru voodoo doll over an open flame) I DESPISE that sadistic parasite of a snake bastard. Ehem now that I've vented I'll review. Goodie for you! You made Sasuke snap to his senses. Love the new chapter, love it. I can't wait to see the reactions of Naruto's friends to his changes. Update as soon as you can onigai?
person Anon
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great idea you have here :) I really enjoyed reading your story, looking foward for updates!

oh and I'm curious to know: Naruto still has his whiskers on or not? *just a minor detail for myself* :)

I can sooo imgagine Naruto in his 'new self' *drools*
person Rho
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for new chapters! -cheers- Poor Sasu-chan. This chapter made me happy for some odd reason. Naruto amuses me greatly with his awesome Kitsune abilities. Once again, I am enjoying the direction that you are taking with this story and I am very curious to see what will happen next. ^^ Wonderful job so far! I am looking forward to reading more!

Also, the pic is finished, I just need to scan it and post it somewhere. I will send the link to you when I do.
person Fourthiv
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I can't wait to see what Sasuke does. I like the fact that naruto isn't blindly chasing after Sasuke, but is letting him come to his own decision about it. Great job!
person Nyuchan
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm..i'm a little disappointed.. I mean Sasukes Revenge was/is ALL for him in his life..and then some random dude (he doesn't know that the guy is naruto..) comes here, shows him something and he thinks all "woah only revenge to life for is stupid" ..hm.. a little rushed in my opinion.

i hope you don't take offense from my words, i actually enjoy the chapters so far (otherwise i wouldn't read them ^.~) and the plot is really good! Anyway please keep writing XD
person MissMayumi
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey yura! Yay I got mentioned! GREAT CHAPTER! huggles..!!auhg so tired..
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. ^^ Another wonderful chapter. Lol And I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder........When naruto goes shopping latter, Will sasuke go back to find him.....or see him again.......And if so will he see how Naruto is well practically being molested or well Ambushed by Women & probably some men too.............And if so will he get mad or well jealous..........^_^ hope so. Lol anyway update soon ok. O And thanks. I know we all make mistakes.......But Mine just happen more then most. Lol So update soon. ^^ I cant wait. O and yuki!....I want yuki. Lol Anyway love ya. See ya latter.
Kisses ^_~