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OMG Wonderful Idea. that sasuke will get his revenge, But just not the way he thought he would. Fantastic Idea. I cant wait to see wear you go with is. Anyway see you soon I hope. ^_^ & Update when you can. TTYL.
Kisses ^_~

oh, neat, I'm so giddy lol, more more more... you make me starve, meanie... Don't really know what to write about this chapter, I enjoyed it pretty much and loved it, but I'm sure you know that hehe. What else... oh yeah... update soon again :P :3

Ladybug452000@Gmail.com please contact me when you update I am reaalllly looking foward to it :P

Yatta! *joy-jumps and bounces up and down whiles punching the air*
You updated!
*tilts head to the side and smiles sweetly*
I have more of those cookies for you. You should know, I made them with love...I always make my cookies with love. There's plenty for everyone! Feel free to hog!

First of all I have to say- AWESOME chapter! *joy-jumps again* Really kakoii! But I was a bit confused at first.
One: What was Sasuke doing in stone village/country?
Two: That whole "genjutsu" thing, mind going into that a bit more?

And also, I just LOVE the way you've portrayed the new and IMPROVED version of Naruto! Absolutely B-U-T-ful! beautiful! *accentuates the "l" at the end*
Sasuke will be falling in no time, ne? *chuckles sweetly but menacingly at the same time*
Yare-yare...I'm ranting again! *takes a bite of own made cookies*

Well, I'll be off now but PLEEEEEEASE...update SOON!!! I CANNOT WAIT to see what happens next! This story is *high-pitched girlish voice* "AWESOME"!!

*finishes cookie and bounces cheerfully off*

This is ok.

I ask you please to continue! It is soo good I want to keep reading it!!

Yay, another cool chapter. Hope that snake-bastard gets what he deserves. Loved the illusion, which will hopefully give Sasuke the kick up the ass he needs. Anyway, really loving your story and can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon. Ta ta.

Actually its preety damn good writing Hope you update soon please for the love of god make Naruto a dominate PLEASE!!!

Hello there, Miss Yura. I am quite glad that I stumbled upon this little fic. It is very amusing so far. I enjoy how you have changed Naruto and given him a personality that isn't seen very often in the show/manga. It is also refreshing to see someone who pictures him with a more mellowed personality behind a mask of giddy dorkiness. This story as my full attention(something that doesn't happen very often). Also I hope that you won't mind if I draw a fanart of your little Naruto. If you would like me to, then please email me or state so here. Oh and forgive me if it takes me a little while. Aside from a few gramatical errors this story is wonderful! 8/10 for creativity, imagery, and overall awesomeness.

I hope u update soon ^^ I like this story ^^