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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person MissMayumi-chan!!
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yura I love your story!! haha..if there was such a thing as a hair blowing jutsu..I'd learn it right away, haha it could be very helpful!! Lol..thanks for being my AWESOME beta for Gravi Cast Geisha's!!
person Nyuchan
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start! Keep going, i'd love to read more from you :D
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I like your fic, I really do, but you really should get a beta. I can tell that you have an interesting plot, but there were so many grammatical errors that I couldn't finish reading it. It's still early in the fic so I would suggest that you have someone beta the chapters you have posted, and then repost them. It will make your fic a lot easier to understand. If you like, I could beta the chapters, or if you know of anyone else that can do it for you than that’s fine. However, I do strongly suggest that you get a beta. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.



Dryad1789@hotmail.com
person Fourthiv
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Oooh Oooh! I'm so excited!!! I cant wait to read more.
person feisu
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im glad you did update the story :3 i like yuki too hehe, well the whole story too, anyways... keep the chapters coming. sasuke has appeared huh... cant wait to read the next chapter as well ....
person Akuma Sora
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it but you ended it with a cliff hanger. . . sorta. Anyways keep up the good job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
person HellzAngel
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So cool to see you updated, it was a great chapter. Funny with those girls following Naruto, it's about time he had some fangirls of his own. Anyway really enjoying this, hope to read more soon. You so rock.
person Izzy
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have no idea if it shows up or not, but i love this!!!!! ur really great at the descriptions, crap bad speller.... and i can't wait till sasuke comes in!!!, well he is... but u'll describe him right? u'd better, u make everyone, hotter..dreamer, yummer...hahahahaha i made a new word! it's mine now!!! hahaha no one else can use it :) yummer,hehe


edward_elric_forever15@yahoo.com

yup yup cya plz send updates XD
person DrakenD4
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a good story, I'm not a fan of Naru/Sasu I think Naruto is just to cute to be Seme but anyway the plot is good so keep it up.
person ching1
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking when we'll see Sasuke, then here he was! I was thinking 'so soon?' then you told us you aren't rushing. *Smiles* Nice chappie. Please do email me when new chappies are up. ^^