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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person Keina
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
CLIFFHANGER NOOOOOOO!!!!!
T.T update sooooon please
I just love sasuke... and the new Naruto XD
person Dark Toy
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was kindda cliché. But it always happens... Or maybe the fact that I've been reading fanfiction for about 5 years it's really bitting my ass now...
It's like I can't have any surprise now.!!!!!!

Bitch... (not you... just my luck ^//^)

Anyway, it was kindda cute. Now, i belive Sasuke is gonna go rampage when someone tells him Naruto is dead and burned... (Even if he doesn't LOVE him, Naruto will always be Sasuke's Dobe...)

UPDATE SOON! AND I LOVE THE NAME YOU GAVE TO NARU-CHAN!
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot naruto, hot naruto, hot naruto, hot naruto, hot naruto, hot naruto, hot naruto,(Day dreaming) hot naruto(Drool) hot naruto.......(drool) hot naruto, naked naruto (drool)..Naruto in shower completely we-O I'm sorry I was lost their for a minute ^^ Lol (sweating from nervousness) Lol..............Sorry. Um anyway Just wonted to say thank you. Lol And I love you too. ^_^ I also wonted to say that both of you are so talented in you writing skills that I wouldn't be surprised If I saw both of you in the future writing Novels. ^^ I mean it. This is like what your 1st or 2nt story.And I'm in love....Wait no Addicted to both of them. ^^ And As for the story, Well Its kind of sad that sasuke doesn't know that its naruto but......Whatever...as long as he does latter right?....O and I love, love, love, love, LOVE, yuki so muck. Lol He is so cute(Squeals way to loudly) God Now I wont 1. Lol I love Yuki love, love, love, LOVE HIM. ^_^ Anyway update ok. Update soon And hope to see you soon. Ttyl.
Kisses ^_~
person Fourthiv
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Definately interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more. I really hope this is Naru/Sasu, because it seems more believable than SasuNaru. Hmm. Plus there are too many SasuNaru stories.
person HellzAngel
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the first chapter of your story, I think it has great potential. Hope to read more soon, keep up the good work.
person Kinyana
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, just fantastic. Cannot wait until the next chapter, really hope you update soon. I love Naru/Sas pairings. SASUKE IS UKE...sorry bout that. Anyway hope to read more soon. Ja ne.
person ching1
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found it interesting. ^ ^
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot DAMN HOT!!!!!!! OMG I love your idea of naruto. God his tail, ears, hear, eyes, Clothing, And that damn fine body that goes perfectly with is outfit. Lol ^^....(Drool)............(drool)....O and the earrings....(wipe drool) nice touch. Really. And if his appearance wasn't enough...O god I love the fact that you made him so smart. (screams with joy)............^^ anyway just wonted to say.....UPDATE GOD PLEASES UPDATE SOON. Lol O and if you can.....well can you make sasuke..........Some how bump into naruto, in your future chapters of course, And make sasuke fall in love with naruto? And not naruto fall in love with sasuke 1st. You know? well its just a thought.....you don't really have to do it. I just wanted...well had to ask. Lol anyway Again UPDATE OK. UPDATE SOON.
KISSES ^_~
person feisu
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool, love his new look, i hope you update soon.. NaruSasu huh? My fav :3 I like SasuNaru as well but there is too much of that, NaruSasu is goooood :3 update! dont forget :3 ja ne

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