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First and foremost, welcome back! Secondly, I hope your daughter gets well.
This was a very good chapter! And I loved it. And Konohamaru is my new idol as well, and I like Sakura a little bit more now that I know she's a yaoi fangirl too. ^_^

Just so you know, Im about 90% done with the rough draft of Criminal. It looks like it's going to be a 25 chapter fic, which is the longest I've ever written. I'm taking a break right now because of a slight road block [im too concentrated on 300 that I can't get back into the Criminal story line. I keep wanting to make Naruto turn good in the end and sacrifice himself for the goodness of Konoha and all that bull] Hehe.

OMG! Everyone is standing by Naruto! YAY!! Even those who don't know he's alive! It's great! I don't know if I would have been so nice to the shopkeeper, though. He deserved to at least get punched!

hello yura..I sent you an email..can you respond to it please??..and 22 chapters??..wow!..last time i checked you only had 9 !!..gooo yura!!

hey, i've never reviewed your story before, but i do want to congratulate you on an excellent job! and i hope your daughter makes a speedy recovery. Ja!

Wow, lady this was a great chapter!! I'm so sorry to hear that your daughter is still ill but it does seem that she's doing better now, so that at least is good. I have only the best wishes for everything to work out well. I'm very glad you updated. The conversation between Naruto and Sasuke was making me nervous for a little while, he got really close to giving things away, but I guess Sasuke does have to find out eventually, I can't wait to see how he reacts. This story isn't even nearly finished is it?? Oh my, it's gonna be so long XD, I 'm so happy about that. I loved that Naruto got into Sasuke's head!! That was excellent. As for the the confusion in the village that was really interesting and rather expected. I hope that when they see how much the shinobi loved him that maybe some of the smarter villagers will think it over. The jounin coming in and joining the the party was also great, LOL, that is so them, they are all really laid back, it's funny. I'm also glad that Sasuke is so confused and upset. He needs to think on this and come to some realisations of his own. I hope that he goes out and meets Naruto, it makes me happy when they interact, even if it's only to fight. Thank you so much for this update as I said before I think you're amazing to still be writing. Oh =D and I did see the chapter, XD LOL, you're right Konohamaru is a genius and I could so totally glomp Kishimoto-sensei right about now XD!! The only thing that could have made it better was if it had been Naruto instead of Sai XD.

Dang... Naruto came off as almost a**hole-ish, but it was also very nice X3. In a it made me feel emotions for both Naruto and Sasuke. But it's sort of understandable... like irritation, maybe? I'd be pretty pissed off that my best friend tried to blast a hole through my chest u_u. Rubbing salt on a wound, plus the fact that he's pretending he's not Naruto... And the mind thing was cool, but I think Sasuke would kick him in the gonads for that one if he ever found out XD. But, it did serve the purpose of making Sasuke find reason to approach him again (seeing as, at this point, even I wouldn't ~_~. If I was Sasuke I'd have said 'fu** that', and ignored the heck out of him. Even if it was all true, I still wouldn't want anyone with an unreadable face smearing all my past issues and problems in my face... unless I could exchange the smearing with a handful of teeth XD), since he brought about the 'why does he know so much about Naruto?' thing. Anyway, great chapter XD. I love Naruto and I love his messing with Sasuke's head + the inner voice he gave for him.... but I also loved that I could relate to Sasuke and how he felt during this... though maybe my relating is a bit colder/harsher because my mind tends to make things darker >:3.

The party scene was so funny!! Poor Naruto didn't get much help with the adults, did he? :D Chapter 347 - Yay for Konohamaru!!! But too bad he didn't do SasuNaru!! But maybe Naruto will think of it! ;)

Hey, welcome back. I hope your daughter is well, she is in my prayers.

Well, what a good chapter, I loved this line 'How I ended with such an immature and stupid inner voice?', it made me laugh.

Anywho, when is Sasuke going to find out Kaji is Naruto, as I can't wait to read that part.

I will look forwards to the bext update.

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

i know! i saw it and was like "i have renewed faith! I "believe it" in naruto again!" I mean 3 hot naked men in one chapter? AHHH! that had to have replaced the lost fanbase from those who left because of the anime. and it HAD to ahve doubled their female fanclub!!

oh and great fic!