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for True Self, New Self

by yuraasakura

person Lici (lazy person who doesn't want to log in)
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOnderful story! I really want to here more. thanks for a grerat read.
person Kyandoru
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know your daughter was in the hospital. Is she okay? Well that chapter did not dissapoint. It was just as original as the first test. Thanks for updating.
ja ne
person feisu
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit. I'm sorry. I had no idea you have kids. How old are you if I may ask? and the kids? Are you and her sick? *runs off into the wardrobe and changes her clothes and steps out in a nurse outfit* I'll help you and your little angel to get better. I hope you guys will get better soon. *cuddles your little girl and then snuggles into you* I hate it when little kids are sick. *mumbles quietly* get better ne? *kisses you on the cheek*
person kyu-chan
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay please update soon!
person Qoh
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaa new pretty chapter. Great job and i can just imagine him watching everybody while laughing. I can;t wait for the next chapter
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope your daughter gets better soon, it bites that she's in the hospital. As always this chapter is excellent. The first test was so clever and I love the slap that Kaji-kun gave Hanabi(applauds) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work and don't worry about updating quickly, your daughter is more important.
person Allys
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have to say thanks so much for this chapter, writing this from your daughter's hospital room is quite the sign of dedication. You even came up with a whole chuunin exam it seems, well done. Also I hope your daughter gets better soon. :)
person HellzAngel
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY Another great chapter, info gathering was good. And slapping Hanabi was just classic, I hate the little bitch. Anywho, great chapter, and I will be waiting anxiously for the next one.

Hope your daughter gets better soon.
person Fourthiv
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, finally! Chuunin exams! I like the way you did the gathering of information. Same theme, different way.
And yes, a multi-chaptered criminal! I've had to take a bit of a break writing, but I'll start up again soon. [im stuck right now, which sucks]
person Jessica
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for more :3

I hope your daughter gets better soon :( having a daughter or son that's sick is never easy. Best wishes for your family, and i'm praying for a quick healing session! Best of wishes to your family <3