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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh update! I cant wait for the chuunin exams!
Hehe.
Side note: I dont know if you ever read Criminal, but I thought that i'd let you know I am writing a multichaptered version. I'm in the process of writing it now, and its turing out really long! Eeek.
Anyway, great job, i cant wait until you update again.
Hehe.
Side note: I dont know if you ever read Criminal, but I thought that i'd let you know I am writing a multichaptered version. I'm in the process of writing it now, and its turing out really long! Eeek.
Anyway, great job, i cant wait until you update again.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY Another chapter, and a very good one. It's great seeing Naruto having fangirls, he's long overdue for it. And the image of a chibi Gaara snuggling a Neji plushie was just so cute to picture and very funny. So, the story is coming along, and it's still keeping me interested.
Um...oh, when will Sasuke find out that Kaji is Naruto, or when will there be some action between the couple?
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne.
Um...oh, when will Sasuke find out that Kaji is Naruto, or when will there be some action between the couple?
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another cool chapter! I wonder how they are going to get Neji and Gaara together? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow so deep lol... sometimes I kinda miss the old Naruto but I still like the new one too.
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing style. You keep adding character depth. Keep up the great work! Still the end of this chapter made me a little sad, because Naruto will out live all of his precious people.(*pout*)I wish that Naruto could share his immortality with Sasuke.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shouldn't your fic blurb read "Time passes, people change..." ??? "Time pass, people change..." isn't proper grammar, just thought I'd let you know since your summary is an important thing which draws readers in (but it looks like you have plenty of those too, XD).
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(sets mug of chocolate milk next to writer-sama)For you.I replied to all three separately cause I forget what i want to say about a previous chapter after I'm done reading the next so I review as I read each chapter. As usual excellent chapter. That Sora's a smart little booger. I'm getting an anticipatory tingle down my spine cause I feel like something big is coming(grins widely)and I'm looking forward to it. Take good care of yourself.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeezes yura to her* Cookies! Hot yummi cookies! *takes a few and goes in the corner and eats them* yumm... yah well that Yuki always amuse me :)ate you gonna put Sasu-chan into a really embarrassed situation? I would love to see his face while blushing and stuff hehe. Good chapter as well. Yeah I knew you are busy so you wont be able to update 3 chapters at once all the time it is understandable. its cool, if I get cookies its all good XD *kisses you on the cheek*
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the update. I've never really thought of his friends and Sasuke growing old, while he stays the way he is, since he is part demon now. I wonder what's going to happen further on, will Sasuke find out that it really is Naruto?
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sleep well! Hm, I like this story alot. I love the way you portray Naruto. So Naruto is taking on the role of protecter, eh? Watch out those who wish to harm Konohagakure, you mess with them you have to deal with Naruto! Please update soon!
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