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for Trick or Treat

by BishounenKrazed

schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3 ^.^
person redOrchid
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah. Just...woah. I'm speechless. I'll say this: it was great, yet a bit confusing, awesome nonetheless. My brain feels like in an orgy too... (or maybe it's becuase here is almost 3 a.m.) Ah, that's why I love your stories. I hope this review makes sense...somehow.

...okay, better if I go to sleep XD Hope I didn't freak you out. (but it IS halloween, after all)

***redOrchid

person Damp
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to be mean or anything. . .I hope you don't take this wrong or anything, but. . .

I didn't like this fic at all.

-Damp *cries from the saddness of it all*
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so at first, I kindof didn't understand like what was happening to everybody, but then I sorta realized that like - the spirit was killing them off, and helping them at the same time - by allowing them to be with their fallen comrades.

I think this was great, and I like your style of writing.. ^^

person Anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke! Tied up and pleasured, hehehe. Great story. You wrote them well and I especially like the mischievous behavior of Naru. :)
person Fourthiv
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot.
I wonder what treat was, though.
person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, too cute!! And very VERY hot as well, my favorite type of fic. I'm usually not a big fan of sex toys used in fics, but I absolutely love the way you handled them, Naruto is such a kinky little bastard XD Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it :D
person Shosuro
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to give you all kinds of props for that one.
There is something about being tied up and filled up that just screams to me and makes me all warm inside. Please continue with your stories!! All of them!!
person Sapphirexkat2
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, so very yummy. I didn't go around asking for candy last night, but this definitely made up for it. Great job! Nicely written and very hot!! The fluff in the end was a very nice touch.
person Artemis-sensei
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Figures. I do a comedy and you do a lemon. How dare you out thwart me!! XD *just kidding* ^^ Hiya, Nomme! Saw your name as the author of the story and decided to give it a read. I liked it lots. ^^ Uke Sasuke and Seme Naruto, regardless of who's in who, can be just as hot as the other way around. XD