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*swallows*

That was .. simply, so amazing. *rubs eyes* For him to experience things like that.

Jiraiya .. and him. This wasn't porn, or smut, or anything else you could so commonly find on this site. This was, simply, the most wonderfully and intelligent piece of fiction ever written.

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God I love it when Naruto looses himself and starts to go feral during sex.

This is a great "first-time" story. I loved how it went from insecurity to need. Great job!

Oh, that was FANTASTIC.

Loved it!

Wow, I must admit, when I clicked to read this based off the description, I wasn't expecting much. But that was *really* good, I think, very in character and very believable.

That was really very good. I'm looking forward to reading the whole series now. I hope you'll have the next part up soon. :)

Can you make Sakura's first time with Naruto, at the point where he has just come back from his training mission?

Oh my gosh...I loved it. I didn't even realize that it was by you until I went to click on your profile. I love your stories sooooo much, so I am very glad that I get to read more wonderful fiction by you. Thank you so much for writing this. I think my favorite part was when sex made Naruto a bit out of control, something that more authors should explore more often. That dirty Jiraiya...I love that pervy old man.

wow, very well written! I like that although it is about the sex, there is thought and meaning behind the actions. Not just a PWP. The characters all seemed realistic and true to a normal person's reaction. Jiraiya's reaction to his change was a thought in my mind, I really like how that played out.

If you wanted to have all 3 chapters together, then I would switch it over to the "General" section. That way you aren't miscategorizing. I'm a het kinda girl, but I may read the yaoi chapter just because I liked your work on this chapter so much. Kudos!