rate_review Reviews

To tell you I love you would just be silly. But I'm a silly person. I love you. I love your story and I love your tallent and I wish I could be half as awesome as you.

So yeah I'm complimenting you and telling you how absolutly I adore and worship you. Because there is every reason to adore and worship you. This chapter was awesome. Absotlutly brilliant. The flicker on / flicker off, was highly effective and executed with sheer style. I see so many people attempt that sort of 'dramatic action' and fail, you however are clearly a god and can not do anything wrong.

My praise, I fear, could go for a long time so I'm calling it quits.

Can't wait till the next update!
Kimra

OMG... I bow down to the master of all things macabre. That was Excellent!!! Like all the fantasy books I read as a child. (Yeah I read some messed up shit when I was little) But WOW... You've totally proved your range... I'm still reeling. You put out some AMAZING Imagery! I loved the effect of the lights, and the monsters, so very FMA. You have officially earned your battle stripes. I'm very nearly speechless, my heart was in my throat. That chapter... I need to think on it.

Ooh!! The battle scenes were so exciting!!!! I loved the way you used the lights to create a mood, it was very cool!

Awesome job. You're story is going very well!!! Keep it up!

Great battle scenes!!! Sasuke was so funny though when he tried to use rasengan. hehehe

this chaper was like some creepy videogame, great work on creating the nightmarish atmosphere.
i've been an ungrateful reader and haven't reviewed before even though i've followed the story since the... 8th chapter maybe. but! that is only because i don't know what do say except that i like it. good fics have that effect.
also, i can't help but be in awe of the rate at which you update. and with such long chapters. it is wondrous.

oh, for this particular chapter i forgot to add that i think you managed to write the different POVs very true to character. they made me smile with recognition, especially sasuke's, cause he's amusing that way :)

THAT was an incredible chapter. You can write an intense action scene.

That was one wild fight, loved the referal to Zabuzza too. Sasuke and Naruto are going to have some healing time after this one that is sure. Good work, thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what you have in mind next.

It's nice to know that you update really quick ^^

Awesome chapter.

At first i was a little confused but as i kept reading i got the nag of it. It was adequately action packed ad all and seems liked Sasame, Naruto, and Sasuke work well as a team together. Good job. Oh, and good description of the CS transformation. Can't wait till Tuesday.