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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh Oh! Chapter 43 was great! It was like watching a horror movie!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*deep breath* Battle! Awesome... freaking... battle! Oh my god, that was intense! You're extremely talented!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic... you hit Sasuke's true personality perfectly.... please keep this fic going... I check it for updates almost everyday!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh awesome! I loved the flicker on/flicker off throughout the entire thing, that really set up the atmosphere. Such a great chapter! Looking forward to an update!
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(big, sad puppy eyes of DOOM) Update soon? Real soon? Onegai?
I love how you incorperate the latest Naruto manga chapter into your fic chapters. It's extremely well done.
And I have to disagree with you on Sasuke's reaction to the Naruto bridge. It wasn't a 'I don't care" reaction, it was a 'I don't really care, you can't make me say I did, even though I do" reaction. Thats my opinion at least. But I agree that it's probably not going to be a happy ending, I really got the feeling that Sasuke is going to have to die to redeem himself.
I really, really love the boy though. Finally, someone that Sasuke is willing to share NAruto with! Are they going to adopt him? (hopes prays) I love this fic, thanks so much for writting it. Ja ne
I love how you incorperate the latest Naruto manga chapter into your fic chapters. It's extremely well done.
And I have to disagree with you on Sasuke's reaction to the Naruto bridge. It wasn't a 'I don't care" reaction, it was a 'I don't really care, you can't make me say I did, even though I do" reaction. Thats my opinion at least. But I agree that it's probably not going to be a happy ending, I really got the feeling that Sasuke is going to have to die to redeem himself.
I really, really love the boy though. Finally, someone that Sasuke is willing to share NAruto with! Are they going to adopt him? (hopes prays) I love this fic, thanks so much for writting it. Ja ne
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the best stories, I have read in AFF for a very long time. Please carry on with the story, it is a brilliant masterpiece.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me very happy. You have the characters acting in a way that I think is natural, and the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto feels right. They love each other and sometimes hate each other, which is a good parallel to what's happening in the cannon. ANd your Sai is priceless. I think you nailed him perfectly. I haven't really seen any continuity errors nor grammar/spelling errors. I really wish I was that good.
I'd love to see some of the rest of the cast, but I'm confident that you will take the story where it wants to go in due time and if the story wants others to appear, they'll appear when they do. Keep up the good work, ja ne.
A.S.
I'd love to see some of the rest of the cast, but I'm confident that you will take the story where it wants to go in due time and if the story wants others to appear, they'll appear when they do. Keep up the good work, ja ne.
A.S.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your Sai ammuses me so! I hope he gets some more story time in later chapters. More please! ~ Jelp
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have sasuke and naruto picked up a son that is so slick. i can't wait i know i say it all the time but this time i mean it even more
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story!
Update soon!
Aki WildQueen
P.S. Mr. Bunny also says hi and update soon!
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Update soon!
Aki WildQueen
P.S. Mr. Bunny also says hi and update soon!
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