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Aw I love Sai. XD That last scene was funny.

It's cool how Sasuke and Naruto are dressed as ANBU ninjas, I like that! Better than what Naruto was going to wear (snicker).

The sleeping scene with Sasuke and the little boy talking was cute. Wonder if the boy has a bigger part to play in this story? Aw, maybe Sasuke will adopt him as a little brother! (not probable but that would be cute)

Awesome job! Keep it up!

Every time I'm sure it can't get any better it does. How do you do that? I love this fic so much! ^_^ I love the quiet moment with Sasuke and the kid - it's really sweet. And Sai and co. crack me up!

I just wanted to say that I love your Sai. His total cluelessness is very entertaining. Thanks for the new chapter! Me

AW! Possitively adorable, ths chapter was. The scene with the kid and Sasuke laying on Naruto's shoulders was the most adorable and sweet thing I have read in a long time. Thanks for posting this chapter and keep up the outstanding work! Please update as well:)

Awww....poor Sai! XD

I find the little boy simply adorable! Can we keep him? ^_^

That last little scene w/Sasuke and the kid was so sweet...I loved the image it created for me!

Love the chapter! Seriously, your updates make my week. ^^

Vivi: >.> see, it's kindda my fault we didn't review the last time

Venny: -glares- you made me miss her yaoi!

Vivi: ^-^ Sorry, 'm forgot! But did you just call us Syble? (is that how you spelled it?)

Venny: I think we knew a girl named that when we were younger, not sure though. But still no yaoi smut!

Vivi: Excuse him, he runs on the stuff.

Venny: Shut up! You got to look at yaoi pics before you left!

Vivi: Hey, Bud gave us the pics you could have looked too.

Venny:......shut up. ANYWAYS! Why does Naruto keep hiding his feeling from Sasuke?

Vivi: And why doesn't Naruto just screw him into the wall?

Venny: -whispers- now who has yaoi problems.

Vivi: I'm sorry, excuse me did you say something.

Venny: No, no not at all, sister dearest!

Vivi: >.> kindda happy I ain't ur really sis. But! we'er getting off track! Still love it! Sasuke's a parinoid possive monkey and I love him!

Venny: Naruto's cute, sweet, complicated, and is sexy, lurv em!

Vivi & Venny: UPDATE SOON!!!

Venny: BUH-BYE!!!

~Vivi & Venny

you make sai so cute. :D

:D I was going to leave it at a smily face, because I'm tired, but now you get an explenation about why the substance of this reveiw is limited to a smily face and an explenation. Cheers! Kimra

That last chapter was wonderful. And I completely agree with Naruto; really what self-respecting ninja would wear such a ridiculous outfit LOL! That was a good one, really! Well it seems it will take longer for Sasuke and Naruto to find a way to use the new jutsu they are working on, either that or Sasuke needs to learn how to transport them away quicker. Don't you just hate it when you get something stuck in your mind and it comes back at the worst times to haunt you; the pink pubic hair, NO! I could just see Sasuke suffering from that still. It seems the first raid as went well, and that Sasuke and Naruto has picked up a new friend, Naruto really is at his best when he his trying to help others. And he has a thing for kids, I have a feeling this boy will be wanting to stay with them, especially Naruto who saved him and Sasuke who seems to be bonding with him; at least over Naruto. Maybe this child can live a better life thanks to them, being they would both not want to see a child go through what they did. Naruto has already stated he didn't want any child to be seen as a moster and Sasuke sees himself in the boy. Well like I said you did a great job on that chapter, thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what you have in mind for the story next. Take care.