rate_review Reviews

hay i've been reading your fanfic for a long time now and i love it XD!! in my mind if they fu@k up the real one i can always act that it went like the way you rote it XD so it's all good!! and i wanted to know if you were going to use clones in later smut.....because in one of your chapters naruto was all like, mmm yes thats an idea...
so yeah love the fic!! plezs keep on writing!!!!

Poor Sai is confused!!! Love him!! That was so cute with the five year old little boy. I wish Naruto and Sasuke could adopt him!!

Lol. This is one of the best chapters you've written to date and it didn't even have any smut!! Anyway it had the perfect balance of humor, there were too many little moments to mention, and some heartfelt stuff i.e. Sasuke and the little boy. And Sai. Omg, Sai lol. That guy is a one man circus without meaning so. Anyway, i loved this chappie.

great chapter!! but i so know what you mean about the bad feeling. rasengan22 and i were conversing, and while i think sasuke will die, she thinks it's gonna be naruto. which would make since, you know, him fighting and dying trying to get sasuke back and all. maybe his death would cause sasuke to come home, but then he'd take his own life because naruto's gone, and then we'd know that kishimoto was a sasunaru fan all along...

damn i'm rambling. anyway, i look forward to saturday! and... did naruto and sasuke just get a son? so cute!!

Awww... More please! :-) I think I could read your story forever and ever...end ever...
I know what you mean about having a bad feeling with the manga, and I strongly suspect it will be Sasuke who dies. Darn it.
I actually like your story better than the manga. It makes my day ^^

~KaraQ

LOL, your Sai is so totally on the ball. I love the extreme level of cluelessness that he always exudes. And OMG! You totally just made me wish this story was an MPreg, don't do that, so wrong XD LOL, but they are soo cute with babies. They should totally just adopt that little one. LOL nevermind me like they need those kinds of complications. And *Snicker* I see the pink hair comment finally came back to bite Sasuke in the ass XD. I love your little play on "traditional" ninja wear LOL, it was really funny, and those little socky things are called tabi boots or just just tabi when they're socks, random piece of trivia for you there. I loved the little smexy referrence and that they fight about stupid things like who gets to go down on whom first XD so Kawaii XD. Oh and I'm kinda sad that he lost the little briefs though XD, you know I think they're way too smexy. that jutsu is kinda getting out of control though!! It's still really cool, but I guess it would only be a last resort sort of thing, cause it's so extreme, I mean damn, that was a big mess. I loved Naruto and his very casual

“Hey, Sasuke…”

“What, usuratonkachi?”

“The trees are on fire.” LOL!!

and Ohhh!! I read your reply to Makkura Arashi, I soo have to agree, I get that feeling all the time. My brother and I have this running quarrel about Bleach vs Naruto, he likes B more, I like N more and I usually say cause it's more realistic, cause nobody dies in Bleach ever, but this is one instance where I wish Naruto wasn't so very realistic. It makes me so sad, to think about.

It took me three days to read through the already exhisting chapters.

BUT OMG IT WAS SO WORTH IT! Why didnt I run across this fic sooner?

There are so many things I absolutely LOVE about it, I think I could type all day so I'll just poke at the things I enjoy most about your writing.

I love the fact that even though Naruto and Sasuke become lovers they don't fall out of character (This happens all too often in fics unfortunately)

I love the fact that you're actually putting the crap in the fillers to good use.

I LOVE the clothes you put Sasuke in. (Buckles arent exactly my fetish but OMG...)

I about died when you had the anthro-form fox demon rape Orochimaru. Twice! I NEVER would have thought up something so ORGASMICALLY twisted!

I absolutely envy you for your writing ability and the steady flow of effort you put into your work. (I am frequently compared to Shikamaru when it comes to doing anything other than reading.)

Your lemons are hot and throughly well done without being rudundant in the slightest.

The plot you've developed is simply wonderful. It's very easy for me to forget that it's a work of fanfiction and not really a part of the cannon.

I could keep going and I probably will at a later date (I fully intend to re-read and re-read the entire thing at least half a dozen times) Until then KEEP IT UP! I've fallin in love with your writing and wholeheartedly wish that you had more stuff published on AFF so I could keep myself entertained inbetween posts.

*HUGE HUG*

That's so true! Sasuke is so useless after sex. xDD It's so cute. Another wonderful chapter!! I so look forward to your awesome updates! <3

awwww poor sasuke! loved the chap continue!

Great update. Lol, i can't seem to get over the hiking the leg part. I laughed for 1 minute. Anyway, great progress, and it seems at least Sasuke might be able to at least tolerate Sasame. Hopefully. Anyway, can't wait till Tuesday.