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jealous Sasuke is always the best xD

so we're really getting into the plot now. i so totally love the jealous sasuke you portray, i can totally imagine him acting that way. what did you think of the chapter 347? i discussed it with allys, but was just wondering about your opinion!! so get back to me ne? and when are we going to have some more smut...not a lemon, i suddenly seem to have taken a liking to smut more nowadays...i loved this chapter. great work i love your story!!

i think this was a funny chapter or maybe it was just me. i had this picture in my mind of sasuke saying i am not going through that same shit with this chick as i had to go through with sakura. no damsels in distress coming in between us this time around. i love this story can't wait til your next update.

I really hope Oro-bastard doesn't pop out any time soon....though it's bound to be in the plot somewhere...and it's gonna be freaky as heck!! ^_^ Anyway, this is my second time reading this and now we all have an answer to who is seme in Kishimoto's eyes!! ^_^ Manga 347...when Konohamaru changed into Sasuke and Sai...who was seme?? lol SASUKE!! WHOOHOO!! REJOICE ALL SASUKE-SEME FANS!! ^_^ (just no more Sai...ick)

I can't believe I haven't review this story. Baka me. Your story is wonderful very believable. You manage to keep the characters in characters and yet you add much more richness to them. Not an easy task. I love the fact that both Sasuke and Naruto are seme and the uke. I don't think either of them would want to be the uke all the time like many fanfics portrays them as. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Take care and god bless.

You know, as much as I like Sesame, I was kinda hopping it'd end up being just Sasuke and Naruto going on the mission together. Another good chapter! ~ Jelp

this has got to be my favorite chapter of all, if only for the beginning scene with sasuke 'proclaiming his territory.' it was both sweet and funny. but i'm starting to really not like sasame. i hope she gets injured or something. (... man, i'm evil...)

i look forward to the next chapter!!

whoo, i had a lot to catch up on. and i'm really tired and out of it right now so my usual review standards are missing this time. sorry! but i'm loving it, all the plotness is great and there's still enough flirtiness (and *whee* posessive!sasuke!!!) to make up for the currently MIA smut. great job as usual, keep it going (i know you will/are anyway :p) *glomp*

LOL, Poor Sasuke, or maybe I should be saying poor Sasame =S. She needs to watch her back with that young man. I'm still not sure how I feel about her, but I feel a little better, like maybe she's not just out to get Naruto. I totally understand the territorial issue. I loved the little interaction in the kitchen, sweet, flirty and Why Oh Why is Naruto still so oblivious. Can't he tell the boy is just jealous? And worried? LOL the random bit about her hair being orange was funny too, I never quite caught that but LOL, you're right. Oh and you totally made me hungry, I could so go for some sushi right now with side of fried eggplant. Oh my god, so good. (Okay that was random O.o moving on) That little sparring match went better than I thought it would, I was with Naruto and the whole body issue. At least he noticed enough to not leave them alone together with an excuse to fight. I also liked the bit at the end with the daimyo. You got kinda deep for a second with the "Now he was old enough to know that most monsters wore the faces of men." It gave me pause. I like that little bits of wisdom sneak in every so often. The whole issue with regaining a little faith in his father was also very sweet. Okay, it's 3 in the a.m. and I can't think too well so I'm off, Ja Na, til Tuesday.

Oooh a jealous Sasuke makes for very good reading I must say. Loved Naruto's thoughts on perversion was linked to training by a Sannin. That little bit about Sakura and Lee into domination was too much! Sasuke worried because Naruto likes orange so he might be interested in the girl was so funny, got to wonder about him sometimes. I'm really enjoying where you're taking the story, it's so interesting. Keep up the good work, thanks for sharing your story. Take care.