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God I am sooo loving these chapters soooooo much, the whole plot and story is soo good and well written that even with no smut, not saying I dont enjoy the smut alot cause I do, but with a story like this, I truelly prefer there to be a plot and you have a wonderful one here, so glad I took those days reading this fic from start to 36 me thinks..was a long couple of days but soo well worth it, and Im totally loving the new chapters, ty ty ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Katsuro?! Erh... was he in one of the former chapters?!
Hmm.. I don't really know what I think of Sasame. I like Sakura better. I'm looking forward to Sasuke ans Sakura's reunion. She's...NOT...so weak anymore ^^
Lol. More people arund means less smexing. Awww... But it's good that they'll have some actual training before running into the Aksutki (sp?!) I love how you decribe Sasuke and Naruto's clothes. Makes me drool! XD

~KaraQ

Lol, Sasuke gets so jealous of poor Sasame. He should really just learn to accept her.

Hm, wonder if they'll ever get along?

This is going great so far! Keep up the awesome work!

You really know how to keep me hooked. ;) I don't have words to express how awesome this story is, I mean really.

“You know I read in a book somewhere that sexual frustration can lead to anger management problems,” Sai said calmly as he looked up at the hooded figure before him. “Are you getting laid enough, Shino?”

I love Sai so much and I only know him from fanfiction. I realy like how you have been keeping this fic going . Waiting for more . Thank you for sharig.

Hi! I've been reading this since ..um.. *blushes* ..the fourth chapter. I'm so sorry, I haven't reviewed earlier. I just wanted to say that I love your writing style and this fic. And I'll continue reading.

Oh, and you actually inspired me to get better with my human anatomy while drawing. Couldn't resist drawing Sasuke with Naruto constanly leering at him *chuckles* Now I think I'm a little better, so thank you for that.

I kept wondering on how weird it was that while Sasuke detested Konoha and thought they were weaklings, he still measured himself and especially Naruto by the titles they had gotten in the Konoha's Academy. If they were wrong in everything else and couldn't see person's true power not to mention were holdidng it back, wouldn't they be wrong about who is the genius as well? I was very happy when they talked about these things after the misunderstanding with Naruto's new jutsu ^^

Well, anyway. Just know that you have a big fan here who can't wait for the future chapters. That's all :)

Kinda late at night or morning but just droppin' a review the story is moving along wonderfully . Your writing is so fascinating that i don't mind the lack of lemon but ... (cough)... Never thought Kyu/Oro could be HOT and SEXY AS HELL but you pulled it off nicely . As always can't wait for the next installment of this fanfic. XD.

holy hell... your smut scenes are probably the hottest i have ever read, but there is something so poignant and beautiful in your portrayel of sasuke and naruto's relationship that keeps me reading and rereading every single chapter... i can just imagine naruto doing anything for sasuke, and sasuke the same... -sighs- great job!!!
ps-i cant believe sai told shino that! i thought i was going to die from laughter! my roommate is staring at me all wierd now as i type this and am still laughing.
pps-im gonna try and draw ya some fanart... try being the operative word...

-dire

Hahah That's so Sai to say such things!

::DIES:: okay, i don't even have the vocabulary to express how much i'm in love with your story. it rocks my socks. i adore it. my favorite naruto fanfiction ever, and I've read about a thousand, I swears. it has a good enough plot to be a completely original work, if it hadn't piggybacked off an established series in the conception. absolutely breathtakingly wonderful. i love you.

now. of course, there is one tiny grammatical detail that has slowly been driving me insane because you make the mistake just about every time you use this word:

Lay VS Lie: I'm an English teacher (yeah, you get all types on aff.net ^^;;;) so I'll explain the difference.

infinitive/present tense: lie ((definition: to recline, i.e. the subject is doing the action, intransitive verb)); past tense: lay; progressive form: lying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): lain
example: I lie down on the bed right now; I lay down on the bed yesterday; I am lying on the bed; I have lain on the bed before; My body was lain on the bed.

infinitive/present tense: lie ((def: to tell a falsehood, i.e. the subject is doing the action, intransitive verb)); past tense: lied; progressive form: lying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): lied
example: He lies to everyone; He lied to everyone yesterday; He is lying; He has lied before; The facts were lied about to everyone by him.

infinitive/present tense: lay ((def: to place or set something, i.e. a direct object is receiving the action, transitive verb)); past tense: laid; progressive form: laying; participle(the form used with helping verb "have" and for passive sentence structures): laid
example: I lay the kunai on the floor right now; I laid the kunai on the floor yesterday; I am laying the kunai on the floor; I have laid the kunai on the floor before; The kunai was laid on the floor by me.

So when you want to say "Naruto ::reclined in the horizontal position:: next to Sasuke," it's "Naruto lay next to Sasuke." yeah. so now you know.