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sai is going to get his ass kick! LOL!

this is awesome!

man are you related to kishimoto or something? perhaps an editor? LOLz. the plot of this fic... it looks eeriely familiar as to how oro-san became a recessive part of sasuke's mind...

DAMN! are you clairvoyant? this is sooo good. i wish kishimoto would update the same pace as you. LOLz. nah. i love your writing style - it doesn't leave gaps nor unanswered questions. it flows so smoothly. being an avid reader of SoD and the naruto manga itself, i must say this work of yours should be the alternate yaoi plot. :D :D

so yeah. sticks to mechanics + no OOCs [from my POV] + smooth flow + great pace = one GREAT FIC. [applause]

and this must be the longest review i've ever dropped in anyone's story. :D

I love Sai. As long a his not taking Sasuke's place I love him. So in this story? I love him. Such a perfect innocent bastard. :D You write him well. :D Keep up your wonderful work and although you may get the impression that people want this story to end (what freaks!) that is not the case for your serious readers. We just want to read an amazing story with plot and smut and all that jazz... and what do ya know? We are reading that! Awesomeness!

So ends my small little rant. :D

Brilliant! Brilliant! Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. School's been crazy plus there was spring break where I don't have computer. Advantages: I just got to read the last three chapters all in a row *drools*. Team Sai interactions crack me up. Especially the tension between Sai and Shino. Part of me keeps thinking I shouldn't laugh, but I have to. The way you write it is just so...so *giggle*. Especially the last line of chapter 40. Excellent!

But! OH NOes! Orochimaru has a plan?? Brr. Brr. I don't think I like him having a plan. I'm starting to get worried. I can't wait for the next chapter though. Oh, and your take on Hinata is very interesting. "Express her displeasure with her newly acquired skills." XD I want to see!

Oh, I love how you present Sai! You should do one of those stories where Naruto has to chose between Sasuke and Sai. ^_^ I can see you having Sai torment Sasuke so...oh, the jealousy! :-D Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp

you are teh best.

somehow you make OroKyuu a canon pairing. [insert evil cackle of perversion here] anyway, can't help but drop another review. although that thing with naruto and sasuke was cliche [the whole, i-want-to-be-with-you-as-me-not-
some-weird-personality-in-me] i still loved how you put it there. goes to show how deep naruto's understanding of their bond is. and all hail your writing of OroKyuu smut. haha.

loved Sai's parting line. >:D freaky smile boy VS bug and shades boy

so yeah... KEEP IT UP! :D i also like how you're sticking with a plan. :D it makes the whole thing more organized. not just some bursts of inspiration... :D

If Naruto had to use Sexy no Jutsu to get trained what did Yondy and the rest of his cell have to do...?

*whacks Kyuubi upside head* Didn't your mother ever tell you to play nice with your toys, or you'll break them?...do demons even HAVE mothers?

Eeek!!!
"Are you getting laid enough Shino?"
I love that line! I just about laughed my self out of my seat when I read that one!!
Thanks for the latest update!! I shall wait impatiently until Saturday!!

Shino and Sai interactions are SO FREAKING FUNNY XD

YAY!!!! 40 chapters!! go you!

and more orchimaru and kyuubi together stuff, theres a truly perverse side of me that enjoyed it XD
as much as I hope that orochimaru doesn't break out, I'm guessing that if you're going to continue for another 20 chapters then its very likely he will, and he'll punish them all in true orochimaru style (with that creepy long ass tongue) but I'm gonna be stubborn and still hopes he doesn't!