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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person bluesake
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.< This story is so damn hot! : D keep going. ^_^x
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL.

I know i should open with what a great chap that was, but that last line had me laughing so hard. *Sigh* Well, it was a good one. And i almost kinda feel bad for what Naruto has to deal with, what with Kyuubi's err...extracurricular activities and all. Don't have to worry bout complaints of the lentgh from me. I'll read it till the scroll bar can go further no more lol.
person Ms Trick
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! I love how you write Sai. It's so true to form and it's so funny! ^^ I really liked the Sasuke/Naruto interaction too--Naruto was very Naruto and Sasuke was very Sasuke. Can't wait for more!
person Total Truth
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you described the kyuubi's cell and its reaction to Sasuke and Ren.
And God do I love Sai! lol "Are you getting laid enough?" :)
person dana
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter especially when i imagined oochamaru the love slave it was another great episiode. That's what i think about long great stories. they are the ones that when they are written well i casn't help but to read again. So write on my sister write on and can't wait for the next update.
person KaraQ
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* I KNOW I shouldn't feel sorry for Ochimaru, REALLY. He's such a complete psycopath! But a part of me does. I wish they'd just have killed him off.
Anyways, as for asking about chapters... Hmm... you know the feeling when you don't want things to end? Well, it's like that in this case. :-)
Great chapter like always. I do hope Sasuke and Naruto will soon have some interaction with others, be it allies or enemies. Please update soon. ^^

~KaraQ
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I -heart- Sai. Lol, that last line was genious.

I almost felt sorry for Orochimaru there but then he let it loose that he was planning something evil so I decided not to spare him any pity. Humph.

Go Naruto for being sweet and Sasuke too!

Awesome job! Keep it up!
person Allys
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ren was really nice about that, I think he needs to be commended but then old people are usually wise. It is still unnerving that he just didn't say Anything though. Not even a look, then again that may be my conspiracy theory type nature running off with me.

Oh and you got me there was a second too, I was all Ooohh!! Kyuubi's being sweet O.o How dumb am I? LOL, how you write that (can you call it a pairing??) always fascinates me though. It's such a mind trip XP

That NaruSasu bit was sweet though, especially the little comment by Sasuke in the end. Not becase Naruto isn't darling, but I guess I expect that kinda thing from him, but Sasuke is beginning to open up, YAY =D. (Oh and I was like Sooo Happy with the end of the last Manga chapter, for some reason it reminded me soo much of this story, and then he picked up that Mizu..? person and I was like GAH!! Right idea - WRONG PERSON!! (anyway this is me totally assuming that you read the manga, cause if not you've totally channeled into Kishimoto's brain) But just in case I made it so that it's not a spoiler.)

Oh and Happy Dancing!! Sai and the others should be along shortly =^.^= , this should be fun. Oh and LOL, Sai and his death wish! Do you think people can die from foot in mouth disease? Cause if they can, I'm pretty sure Shino will help XD

p.s. Slap some ears on me and call me Pinky - I'm SO there (I'll try not to mess up though, Zort!)
person nameless/soul
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I just got done watching Haru wo Daiteita (lots of yaoi fucking filled anime) and now you give me Orochimaru being raped! You rock! And the last comment Sai made was pricless!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Sai is hilarious! Love him! Glad that old man kept Naruto's secret. ;) Would love some more SasuNaru or even NaruSasu because those two are so hot together! :)