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Vivi: Oh, no he did not just say that..... I didn't think he would be that....to say that ta Shino, he has Kiba! Of course he is!

Venny: Wait, why did I like that sene where Kyuubi was doing Oro?

Vivi: Cause your a sick person (though I thought it was good too), wait, why didn't he take the invitation to screw Sasuke?! The whole time I was on the edge of my seat chanting, "Do it, do it, do. it. dooooooo iiittttttt!" Then he had to go all gushy. He wanted you, finally like you wanted, then he goes and says no. I was so mad, then cursed some.

Venny: You mean said every curse word that you knew in English, then when you ran out you started to say them backwards.

Vivi: SO, the lemons she writes are just so GOOOD! If only she would write another one...(hint hint)

Venny: Wait what were we doing in the first place?

Vivi: Reading yaoi....... got angry about no lemon between Sasu and Naru, laughed, oh! we're reviewing!

Venny: Ah, now I remember!

Vivi & Venny: PLZ UPDATE! WE LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S SO YAOI-LUSH-US!

Venny: BYE&BYE!

~Vivi & Venny

Amazing story!! I love it, love it, love it! It's so well written and the characters are not OOC at all. And the smexyness doesn't hurt;) Please continue, I can't get enough!

I don't say this often enough but I love your story! I just...gods the way you keep them in character and play off the story to your liking...*claps* Cudos!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Please, please update soon...I'm dying to read more! GAHHHH! Don't keep me waiting! LOL ttul!

oh man oh man oh man........please keep going. this is better than watching anime!

Hello there,

are you sure, you aren't stating you will keep the smut low because you want reviews ;-) Because I think there will be many people protesting against this decision. And I am one of them :D

I don't need sex in every chapter (not that I would dislike it) but the mixture between plot, humor and smut you presented so far (though the last two chapters were very low in intimacy between Naruto and his beloved one...) was one of the highlights in this story. Busy or not they are young and horny (that sounds like one of those advertisings for sex hotlines o_O) and some... fooling around every now and then won't do any harm :D

Then again it's your story and till now I don't have anything to complain about... But now go and write some NaruxSasu smut XD
Nathaniel

Hmm...why do I get the feeling that the old man is going to see Kyuubi having fun with Orochimaru? ::snickers:: Now the million dollar question: who will they get to become the new Otokage? Is it possible one of our beloved will get the position - Sasuke or Naruto? Update soon! ~ Jelp

Arrrgh, you friggen sadist! *whomps* You and your damn cliffhangers. *pouts*

You know, that bit with "Rasengan whorled into existence" I keep reading that as 'whored into existance" and it always, ALWAYS makes me go "you should have known better if Jiraya taught it to you...oh wait, there's an L in there..."

D'ya have any idea of how long this is going to be? And when is Itachi going to come in?

Anyway, enough of my senseless blathering. Keep up the orgasmilly good work!

Ah! Cliffhangar!! Well it looks like they came up with a good plan. Can't wait to see how the others react when they find out what Naruto has inside him. :D

Nice chapter. I am sad to hear that the sex will be less, but for the sake of the story I understand it *pout*. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Dun dun dun! Ohhh I'm excited. I'm all excited and anxious for the next update. Your so awesome and your write so well. And I just have to tell you that again and again because there are not enough ways or times you can tell deserving people that sort of stuff.

Keep up the work and we'll all keep reading!

Awesome goddess of awesomeness = you

Cheres!
Kimra