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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person Spiral Wolf
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I have reviewed yet or not but I shall once again. Your story is the best on this and other sites. I cannot wait until Tuesdays and Saturdays for the new chapters. Your story is well writen with an origial plot as well as fantastic character development. You have created a "new" universe for me to read and enjoy. Thank you tons. Every chapter just leaves me wanting more.
person Allys
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome, you're turning out to be quite the strategist lady, or are you holding Shikamaru hostage somewhere? Cause if you are I'd totally like to meet him. Hey if you ever decide to bend your mind towards world domination, tell me I'll be there XD. That thing with Sasuke's eyes would be very very unnerving, I know, I've had people digging up inside my eyes with lazers it's Very uncomfortable, and they gave me drugs. Other than that, I can't wait to go in Naruto's head with Sasuke and passenger, I hope the old guy doesn't have a heart attack or anything, cause that kind of experience is definitely in that area.

Oh and p.s. don't worry about the smut - we were all in love with this story LONG before there was any, the smut is like icing, on a Reallly Good cake. Til Tuesday, Ja.
person mscs3
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaaa...cliffhanger. *sniffle* Looking forward to the next installment. Me
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really enjoy this story. Especially since the manga seems to be taking a similar course with a character having Orochimaru sealed inside him.
person rnc4
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is a great fic. I'm really excited to have found it...I just spent several hours going through all the chapters that were out already, and I'm definitely hooked. I'm kinda curious if Naruto will try to "save" Orochimaru at some point...after all, that's what Naruto does a lot in the show...save the bad guys...along with everyone else. Anyway, I'm really excited to see where else you'll be taking the story. Would you mind adding me to the email list when you update?

Thanks! Great job!!
person MeLaiya
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you. Please update soon and keep up the good work
person MeLaiya
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you. Please update soon and keep up the good work
person holycow
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not gonna lie I'm a little disappointed w/ this chapter, after there being so much sexual tension between sasuke and naruto the previous chapter i was really expecting/hoping that there me some smut in this chapter. Def took it in a different direction. It would of been nice to see how naruto would take advantage of sasuke feeding into his buckle/leather fetish. Well hopefully we'll see it soon, nice job tho! Still am obsessed with this fic
person Allys
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Naruto... that was so him... So why he would make a great Hokage. Such a big heart, and such a sad soul. Are you trying to make me cry...? Cause I'm fighting it hell hard. And Sasuke... He's so broken... but Naruto loves him, how is he only now noticing this? For a genius he can be incredible dense =). This chapter was Good, hell I could be corny and call it touching, because it was. Well done. I also loved your warning XD, LOL. As for the others it was nice to get into their heads for a bit. Are they going to find them soon? Are Sasuke and Naruto ever going to go home? Don't answer that, I'll read on and see. Until Saturday then, Ja ne.
person Jelp
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Naruto. I can't remember if Sasuke knows at this point whether or not the council tried to lock him up. I hope Naruto does get to become kage - whether of Konoha or Oto will be interesting to see. ~ Jelp