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mehhh i feel kinda shy leaving a review since you get so many already...but what the hell.

nyahh i love it ^_^ i thought your writing style was iffy at first, but you definitely improved a lot and nows its just.. wonderful. so is the characterization, and the relationship developement *squeals. it seems so believable. and adorable *squeals again. i dont really like the use of the fillers, but it makes for a decent plot, so whatever. agh it's so late and she (my friend) won't leave me alone about it grr ::grumps:: 'night.

i'm nauseous and sleep deprived, so this review is severely lacking, but i wanted to at least take the time to tell you i loved the last two chapters :D sasuke's outfit during the meeting was quite yummy, and i increasingly squee more and more over naru's buckles/armguards fetish. also, i liked all the contemplation in today's chapter. how what could've been a painful fight turned into more contemplation, especially of naruto on sasuke's part--i liked how he realized naruto hid his own feelings somewhat as well, and that he didn't like it, and why. and naruto's reasoning for continuing the sound village was smart but sad and brought back that lonely feeling that thinking about naruto's past often brings. and the disagreement about whether bonds make you weaker or stronger, when sasuke realized naruto basically said he loved him--totall squee! the tone of the scene and the realization in it was intense but tender at the same time, the way sasuke responded and just let naruto embrace him afterwards ... ahhhh *happy sigh*

the look into how each person in the search party reacts and thinks about finding naruto and naruto's return was interesting as well. it also worries me about them actually finding him though. shino's thoughts especially make me wary. i'm still loving sai, and his sort of 'look like you're breezily goin with the flow while really directing the search in your favor' attitude.

now i'm off to hopefully rest, 'til next time! *huggles*

WAA! (dies) The Naruto/Sasuke scene was so cute, expecially the last part. It gave me warm and fuzzies. Though I do understand Naruto's need to be around others. Its very a very Naruto-like thing to want. :D

Great chapter, hope you update soon!

Another wqinderful chapter. Awww Naruto and Sasuke are in love. I loved the arguement/talk between those two. It was kind of heart clenching. I also liked seeing stuff from Team 8 and Sai's point-of-view. What more can I say? I love this story, but you already know that!

Aww, Hinata's too cute. And you just NAILED Shino and Kiba's characters in a few short paragraphs. ;) I love the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke--it felt very real. Can't wait for more!

That just gives them that much longer before we find them.

I love how Sai is doing his best to delay them finding Naruto. He's being a good friend to him. Now Sasuke knows that Naruto loves him and is willing to let that feeling in his heart. I wonder how they will deal with Sai's team if they ever do meet up. Naruto is not going to want to go back and he's definitely not going to allow the others to try and hurt Sasuke or drag him back, before Sasuke finds his brother. You continue to build Sasuke and Naruto's relationship even better. :)

Yay another chap. The time sure passes by fast. I was surprised to see this up till i realized it was Tuesday. This chap was really nice. It was quite touching to see Naruto in an emotional turmoil. And it's a good thing that Sasuke was able to see through the veneer Naruto is really good at putting up. The part where Naruto tells him he is at his best when he protects those he loves was quite touching to me, especially when they hugged. Very sweet. And Kiba is so awesome. I'd raise hell back in the village for Naruto too. You have to make Hinata awesome in this! She sounds like she could woop ass. Anyway great update!

'That just gives them that much longer before we find them.'

lol I really love Sai in this story, he's just great!!!

*****

Thank you so much for this wonderful story!!! Constant Updates, long chapters, great characterization, it's PERFECT!!!! *bows before your awesomeness* XDD

Zrina, if I could I would buy you EVERY naruto plushie avaliable (even the creepy orochimaru one)

Your Sai wins just about everything. EVERYTHING
I like that Shino is pissed off with Sai but won't do much about it because of his stoic nature XD
Theres no chance of working in a little bit of KibaHina is there? They are so cute as a couple :D

As always your work is so addictive to read, and makes my tuesday (and my wednesday when I reread it XD)

Hope you weren't late for work!!

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