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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...... I... LOVE...YOU! XD To make my crappy day that much better with a single chapter from you. S' just awesome. ^^
It amazes me, how you can actually make me like characters, I never had that much love for before. Shino and Hinata just kicked ass in this chapter. And I must say, that even though there wasn't THAT much action (as in sex and fights) in this chappie, it was actually one of my favorites. :-)
The idea of a new Sound village is rather well thought up. And I'm glad it was Naruto who had the thought. It sometimes pisses me of, how when people view a leader and fanatics as being evil, and of course...they are ALL evil then. (Just look at the Slytherins in the HP books)
If people had nowhere else to go, it would make sense to join a village where other outcats belonged and make a life there. I wonder if there are nin children in the Sound Village as well?!
Lol. Maybe Naruto will end up as a Otokage then.
I do hope that we'll soon have a bit more insight as to what going on 'at home' in the Leaf village. How's Sakura, Shikamaru's and all the others reactions to all this. ^^
I'm looking so much forward to the next chapter, so please update soon :-)'
~KaraQ
It amazes me, how you can actually make me like characters, I never had that much love for before. Shino and Hinata just kicked ass in this chapter. And I must say, that even though there wasn't THAT much action (as in sex and fights) in this chappie, it was actually one of my favorites. :-)
The idea of a new Sound village is rather well thought up. And I'm glad it was Naruto who had the thought. It sometimes pisses me of, how when people view a leader and fanatics as being evil, and of course...they are ALL evil then. (Just look at the Slytherins in the HP books)
If people had nowhere else to go, it would make sense to join a village where other outcats belonged and make a life there. I wonder if there are nin children in the Sound Village as well?!
Lol. Maybe Naruto will end up as a Otokage then.
I do hope that we'll soon have a bit more insight as to what going on 'at home' in the Leaf village. How's Sakura, Shikamaru's and all the others reactions to all this. ^^
I'm looking so much forward to the next chapter, so please update soon :-)'
~KaraQ
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have a feeling that when those four finally find naruto and sasuke, three of them will be in for a world of surprise. i mean, shino needs to lighten up. naruto will go home when everything's over, not to mention he can't go home because of his deal with fuuma. and hinata... haha, i don't think naruto would let her do whatever it is she wants to do to sasuke.
are they going to meet up with them? i would assume so, since naruto and sasuke now have a contract with rice. anyway, great chapter. until next time!!
are they going to meet up with them? i would assume so, since naruto and sasuke now have a contract with rice. anyway, great chapter. until next time!!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention, I love Hinata in this! "that prideful idiot" made me giggle XD
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is just fantastic!!! From chapter one till now never a dull moment. I get very excited when you post! I can't wait to see where you take us next chapter:)
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When you put it like that it makes it ok perv on them XD
Yay! More plot goodness!
I'm sure everyone has mentioned the complete drool worthy idea of Sasuke in buckles, *sigh* so swoon worthy :D
I forgot to mention in chapter 36, this line:
"If he were to lose this in the future, he wanted to have experienced enough to make the heartache that he would undoubtedly carry for the rest of his life worth it."
It almost made me cry!!! I say almost because smut quickly followed XD
I have no idea why it moved me so much, but the idea of a Naruto completely heartbroken over a dead Sasuke is just so sad <--- for lack of a better word
So I have to have confirmation, this story will have a happy ending right? please?
Adi trusts Zrina to do the right thing XD
XXX
Yay! More plot goodness!
I'm sure everyone has mentioned the complete drool worthy idea of Sasuke in buckles, *sigh* so swoon worthy :D
I forgot to mention in chapter 36, this line:
"If he were to lose this in the future, he wanted to have experienced enough to make the heartache that he would undoubtedly carry for the rest of his life worth it."
It almost made me cry!!! I say almost because smut quickly followed XD
I have no idea why it moved me so much, but the idea of a Naruto completely heartbroken over a dead Sasuke is just so sad <--- for lack of a better word
So I have to have confirmation, this story will have a happy ending right? please?
Adi trusts Zrina to do the right thing XD
XXX
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok for some reason aff.net cut out half of my review :(
That line got me thinking that maybe this fic won't have a happy ending.
It will though, right?
Adi trusts Zrina to do the right thing XD
:D
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That line got me thinking that maybe this fic won't have a happy ending.
It will though, right?
Adi trusts Zrina to do the right thing XD
:D
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a common problem. Cut off the head, but the body still convulses. Love the story, your descriptions of all the characters (you make Sai like-ably twisted and quirky rather than terrifying so, which I didn't know was possible) and the smex! Yummy stuff there.
Do we get to see more possessive!Naruto? I live possessive!Naruto, 'cause usually, there's lots of claiming-SasUKE smex afterwards. And we get to see really cool, raging!Naruto.
Do we get to see more possessive!Naruto? I live possessive!Naruto, 'cause usually, there's lots of claiming-SasUKE smex afterwards. And we get to see really cool, raging!Naruto.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I loved the part at the beginning with Sasuke driving Naruto crazy with his clothes and with shifting around beside him. Sasuke has become more open with his desire for Naruto and with making Naruto think of him so much. :)
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i had three great chapters to catch up on! these were wonderful, and so very hawt in many places. i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving Sasuke's new outfit, and Naruto's fetish with the arm guards is hilarious. Can't wait until tuesday!