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ACK! I FORGOT TO REVIEW!!!!!! TWICE!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved that last chapter though, i love how close they are getting.
*chucks cookies*

do we get to see more of orochimaru soon? i know its odd, but reading about kyuubi torture him fills me with glee and brings out my sadist side :D

when i read your fics i always forget they're 15-16 year old boys XD

Okay, I have two pictures done sketched, I'm totally giving you my e-mail... and I'm going to get them scanned in when I get the chance, maybe on friday if I get the chance... *waves hand in front of face* Anyways, my e-mail is: crimsonnever@yahoo.com drop me a line and I'll get back to you to discuss artistic-ey... stuff. <.<...>.> Yeah, so, the story is awesome, I look forward every single Tues and Sat for my Naruto fixes of the day after Shippuuden and the manga chapters come out on Fri's. You are a truly awesome writer and I hope to the dieties that you start writing stories that can be published instead of just fanfiction because you are totally talented and should write for reals. Keep up the awesome work, now I must wipe my 'puter clean of blood... lol.

Loved that chapter; great job! The part about dobe-ness being a STD was hilarious.

This story is going great! Keep up the awesome work!

YES! :D
i wonder how sasuke's new outfit will look like :). oh, and i still hope for some full narusasu lemon :) is there going to be one?

So hot! I love the line about Naruto being able to call up a thousand man army at will -- what an awesome way to phrase that. That whole scene was great! Can't wait for more!

SWEET chapter! And guess what? I didn't spot any errors! LOL. Anyway, i'd beta for you in a hot minute. However i hate the thought of not being able to review one of your stories on here if i did that! There was a delciious sense of humour as always. I especially like how Sasuke is indirectly developing a sense of humor. That part about the dobe having him think dobe thoughts gave me a good chuckle. Let's see, i also liked how when Naruto was stitching him up, he decided to inject an indirect compliment to amend his preivous statement, which is so him really. Good job all around. I can't wait for the next update.

Ummmm, wow. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Man, I tell you what sista'. Your sex scence's are DY-NO-MITE! It seems our little Sasuke is getting a little pervy. I LOVE a Kinky Sasuke! WooT! Can't wait for Saturday!

awesome chappie, kyaaa i love this story more and more, and that's saying a LOT since i already loved it XD i want to sing your praises. i love how you work things in so smoothly from one type of scene to the next, even as far as working flirtatious things between the boys into normal activities like sparring--sasu nuzzling the clone's hair before stabbing his ass lol (and before, the cooking, and there's plenty of other examples too but i'm sure you already know them anyway so i'll leave it at that :p) and omg, i loved the sasu-gets-stitched-and-then-sucked off/fucks naru's mouth O.o most awesome. (also to reiterate how much i love him being turned on by naru's kyuubi-ness, naruto KNOWING sasuke's turned on by that, and the erotic ways naru uses that knowledge--and yet, at the same time, though naruto was tapping into kyuubi a bit, sasuke was still able to feel that sense of power/control he also gets off on; it's a great blend and so fitting for him, i think, to not only crave his own power, but be turned on by naruto's as well) also the discussion of terms for them, and all of sasuke's suggestions being longterm--yaaaaaaynessss! wheeee!! ack, now how is this whole "meeting" gonna go?? *bites nails til saturday*

*lovelovelove4u*

i been waiting for ur story! i can't have a good day without reading ur latest chapter! I got it bad!

Another great chapter for my favorite fic that I'm currently following! Well, that sentence was a bit rough around the edges. I really liked this chapter, I like how you make good use of the filler characters; I disliked most of them but they are enjoyable the way you write them. Also, Sasuke's war on the clones was quite amusing. As was napping in a tree...I wish there were trees around here with branches big enough to nap in! Eh, I'd probably still fall out though. The only thing I saw that I would have done differently from you, was the sentence:
"Naruto couldn't help but notice that all the words Sasuke had picked had long term significance." I would have used "had a long term connotation" instead of "had long term significance," it carries the precise meaning of what you're trying to say, and also I feel like it shares more phonetic and rhythmic elements with the rest of the sentence. I don't know, that's just me, but it stuck out a little so I noticed it, so I thought I would mention it. =P

That's all! Update soon please! I love your story.