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sasuke sure is useless after sex. LOLZ. great chapter. :D

thanks for the imagery of a pink thingy with pink hair ( i will not be able to watch the yugioh american tournment for a while) other than that what a laugh as always another super chapter. is shino being threatening to sai because he likes naruto. i can't wait for the next update.

-shudders and foams at the mouth- this fic is fast becoming an addiction for me... you are an evil evil person! but fantastic as well. i am absolutly in love with how descriptive everything is, even the smutty scenes are so rich in detail that it makes you feel like its happening right in front of you (definetly a good thing in my opinion!). and for some strange reason, the fact that naruto would ignore his own orgasm for sasuke touched my heart... hmmm. really nice! and i am very happy that you liked my analogy! hell, i still squeal whenever i see mlp! one of my fav oldies. anyway, absolutly magnificant chapter here, 10 out of 10 stars!
much love -direchan

Whoa...

Whoaaa...

Holy !#$% O_O...

That was so hot I can feel my fingertips burning. *shivers* That moment when Naruto said "Mate" I swear, my reaction was so similiar to Sasuke XP. And..

"Power, control and Naruto." DUDE! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO HOT! It was worth the wait/delay XP. AWESOME JOB!!!

Oh you rock, so so much...marry me.

Wow. That was Primal, and beautiful. Your Naruto is so purr-fect - understanding, giving, loving, intelligent, talented, dangerous, and humble. An all round beautiful specimen of man. And Sasuke is like a tragically flawed, hungry personality, so beautiful, yet so fucked up. I need to bow to the greatness that is you, you totally captured some of the essence of the series that I love so much. This is a fantastic piece of work. The moment when they tried to describe their relationship gripped at my heart. In one of those, I'm so happy yet scared out of my mind type of ways, I guess that hit a little too close to home for me. There are so many things that could go wrong in a situation like that it is truly just a leap of faith that gets you through, and I rambling about irrelevant shit again. That was beautiful and your fight scenes as usual amaze me, i think they're awesome, and I love that you do them so many skip over that aspect of them but it such a big part and one of my favourite parts personally, coming form a martial arts background with a brother who still does the most amazing things sometimes, I have to say it is a thing of beauty, the tension and movement of bodies, the total commitment to a motion and a goal, and I'm gone off again. Anyway, thanks for the update, you honestly do make my day, and I was a little scared today, but you came through as always. I think it's awesome that you got some writing done, hurry and post chapter 37 so I can have a scene to draw Sasuke in his sexy new outfit =D. Don't mind me enjoy the rest of your week.

Well, you already know that I love you and your story...so...what is there for me to say?! haha I love those two! I know I have to enjoy these sweet moments because I have a feeling Sasuke going to go back to the "I hate everything mode" soon. The bathrooom scene was HOT. Naruto is such a little perv (reminds me of myself!!! hehe Sorry about all that teasing with the editing! I am actually done with the chapter it's getting beta'd so it should be up soon. Though my NaruSasu could never be as hot as you make yours!!!

I'm so happy! I'm so happy! I'm so happy!
Thank you for the update, like always this was HOT and very entertaining!!
I was waiting for your update earlier but then when you didn't update I was sadden!!
I had to go to work today without your next chapter....makes a sad panda.
But I read it, it was great! Love the bathroom scene!!
I'll be waiting for Saturday!

Wow! What a hot lime at the end!! I really love the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke in this story. It just keeps getting better and better! :)

Awesome. Your my hero! Only bad thing is that you didn't close of one of your italic markers properly and the whole last half is in italics. Reckon you'll get told that by everyone else as well though. :D

Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see the next three chapters. :D