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Another amazing chapter! I was trully hoping that Sasuke's clothes would get torn to shreds so he would have to wear something else. ~ Jelp

I just have to say that i saw this story recommended somewhere and I started it today, and could not stop reading until the latest chapter, 35chapters...in one day...it was amazing..so much so that ive now put off writing an essay i have due in about 5hrs......all i have to say is WOOOOOWWW..ive been so miserable trying to find another truly epic naru/sasu fanfic..where the author actually consistantly updates and you are a godsend!!!! keep up the amazing work and please update frequently..im now a fan of urs forever!!!

OMFG I read the whole fucking thing in less than two days!!! This is one of the best, I mean absolute best Naru/Sasu/Naru fics I have ever read...and i ve read a lot. Please please please for the love of humanity update soon. Im begging you, this is so good, so hot, so intense and so in character I feel like I should worship you...can I? Anyhoo, please keep up the excellent work and update A.S.A.P. like in the next millisecond if at all possible. Soooooo loving a Sasuke on the recieving end and staying in character at the same time. OMG your sex scenes are off the fucking chain!!! *phew* ok I think Im done now. But seriously update a.s.a.p. Ive been passing up this fic for weeks just thinking it wasnt my cup o tea until I finally just decided to go for it cuz I had nothing else and Im so fuckin glad I did...I think i love you. Please update soon.

OW my brain is burning from picturing a guy with short pink curlies, but it was funny too, i just hope i don't start laughing the next time i have a mouth full lol keep up the good work i love this story.

fascinating as ever, the other guy i forget his name will cause trouble for Naruto and Sasuke if he starts asking questions to the hokage. He is not as dumb as Sasuke thought. Sasuke is a jealous little cat isn't he. Great chapter!

WHAT!!!! ASUMA DIES!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO! Yeah, that was a big...BIG spoiler for me. O well jingle bell. I have been with you every TUesday and Saturday! I love this story! Especially the first love scene. Sasuke tearing up after sex....(gushes). AND your story actually has some type of point, not just them having sex...well the sex is good, but sex AND a story is even better. Wow, I can't wait till the climax (of the story) happens! Yeah, and this chapter. I had to use a dictionary. Which is good...I can get smart while reading yaoi! Who would've thought...

Good chappie! This time around, i particularly loved the sense of humour you put in it. Very natural and easy. It's always interesting to have Sasuke and Naruto do mundane things. Anyway, so Sasuke is gonna train Naruto with a katana or sword huh? Thats pretty cool I can't wait to see how that goes. So Sai and crew are not far behind either. I wonder if they do find them what Sasuke's reaction would be. I don't think he'd appreciate others ruining thier privacy for, well, anything. However, he'd be in his right for more than one reason. Especially considering that Naruto does not deserve to be locked up.

Anyway, there was only one small thing i caught that you can fix after you come back. Where it says "Naruto sank into him once, twice more as he rode out his orgasm before slowly lowering himself onto this lover." I think you might've meant "his lover". Hope you had fun on your trip. Can't wait till Tuesday!

i absolutly love this fic.... every time i open up aff and see a new chapter, i squeal like a six year old watching my little pony for the first time... great job!

So much love for your Sai. And I really want to see Sasuke trying to teach Naruto the subtleties of etiquette now. ^^
I think I'm going to have to draw you fanart just as soon as I have time - this fic has made my life so much better the last few weeks!

Awesome-ness in the form of words. I am still addicted and still reading.

I was actually kind of worried you where going to go into a wordy storyline that didn't fit with the rest of the piece. But I see you will not stoop to such poor writing and I am thoroughly impressed by that!

Keep up the amazing work.
Kimra