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Another excellent chapter! I also really like the way you portray Sai. He seems a hard character to write about, but you charactarize him just as I imagine him in the manga. ~ Jelp

Plot development, yeah! I still adore your Sai, and my curiosity is piqued as to what Hanzaki needs to do. The dinner banter was great. And I was really happy for the early update. XD

HAHA! Sai, you are priceless. Loved the Naruto/Sasuke interactions (and not just THOSE kinds of interactions) too. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for another!

kyaaaa yay! early update!! wheeeeeee!!!!! aiyaa, things are getting more complicated the longer sasuke and naruto stay in one place, it seems. building up to big confrontations? it makes me anxious! in good and bad ways. after all, it'd be boring if things stayed all peaceful, ne? still, i don't want naruto to be in more danger than he already is cuz of orochimaru--ACK!! ahh well, you know i won't mind whatever happens, cuz i trust your storytelling and you haven't failed my expectations yet. aaaaanyway, whooo i love how naru and sasu's sex life is becoming so integrated into their everyday lives. sex on the floor of the training room--HOTNESS! He had to admit it was working wonders for their cardiovascular health but wasn't doing shit for their taijutsu. hahaha! so true, ne?? i love naruto's lil fetish for sasuke's armguards, too. that is hot also. ^_~ (not to mention the "mine" and "yours" that they both know what they really meant--kyaaaa!!!! *superfangirlsqueal*) and their banter while sasuke made dinner--i loved that! sasuke "cheating" by using sharingan is funny, i can so see him doing that lol. and his momentary "attack" of naruto while he reached for the cups was nice--another show of the progression of their relationship.

i can't wait for more, omg, i love it so much!! suspense is working up, i'm excited to see what happens next, despite my slight anxiety over what could be!!!!

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Yeah!!!!!!! I was sooo happy that you updated early....the bad side about this early update is that I have to wait just a little bit longer for the next update!...Sigh...oh the torture. Oh well I love the story so far, I will wait impatiently for your next update!

Question: What situation with 'that damn fool Arashi'? Also, I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. Cool fic. Is Orochimaru going to try to break out again? If so, is Kyuubi going to help him?

LOL, that chapter was awesome!! There was Drama, Hot man smex, Plot advancement, A very almost confession (for which you should consider yourself hearted), A fetish that just Screams bondage, Domestic bliss, Man smex, Humour, Groping, Mention of blow jobs to come, A scene with 3 Konoha lovelies and 1 Konoha sweetie... Did I mention the Smex!!! Oh and the promise of 6 more chapters!! Did you hear the dreaded Fan-girl squeals? Cause I'm pretty sure I worried my neighbours =D.

I love the banter that goes on between Sasuke and Naruto, they are hilarious!
I also love how Naruto is fixated with Sasuke's arm guards!
Can't wail until next chapter!

Also, a jealous Sasuke is very hot, love how he plans to deal with Naruto's infidelity! lol
"Breaks fingers".....:)

Another great chapter!! I loved the smex parts, especially when Sasuke teased Naruto at the counter. It was funny how Naruto got revenge too. I love how their relationship has progressed. :)