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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, you actually made me go back and watch 139 just for Sesame. The power you hold, Zrina. :P Seems like the plot is starting to thicken again *excitement!!* and man do I love a Jealous!Sasuke. :D
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY 500+ reviews!!! *throws confetti*
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Naruto and Sasuke are getting closer to achieving their new combined jutsu. It was cute how Sasuke found himself feeling sorry for Sesame when she cried. His relationship with Naruto keeps changing him for the better. :)
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you that as my schedule grows increasingly full this story is the one I insist on making time for.
You are an amazing writer so please, keep it up!
You are an amazing writer so please, keep it up!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Zrina! After watching Naruto Shippuuden my SasuNaru fangirling has increased tenfold, so I went on the google looking for yaoi smut and I found your fanfic through your comments on the sasuxnaru livejournal community. So here I am finished reading (after 3 days!) and ready to review.
I'm so happy I stumbled on this marvelous story (that's turning out to be THE epic narusasunaru by definition)! I searched for a story like this one everywhere. A maturely written, multi-chaptered story with weekly updates(!). Unbelievable. I adore you so much you're now 2nd if not 1st on my top fave fanfic authors. (Btw in chap33 Naruto says: "that's all your gonna get" it should be "you're" x3)
I could go on and praise non stop about SoD. I think you make a perfect balance between action, crack humour, smut, romance, and angst and your writing style is wonderful and very professional with good consistent chapters.
What really captivates me in this story is the way you develop the whole Naruto and Sasuke relationship (without leaving out the other characters^^). Their relationship keeps growing as physical passion becomes more spiritual^^. Those times when Naruto touches his chest, the two boys are reminded of the same thing and yet they still don't have the courage to face their past wounds. I find those parts so heartbraking!;_;
That scene in chapter 32 where Sasuke sincerely smiles at Naruto and they run through the forest; it was so romantic and soothing. It's just the two of them in their own world reminiscing back to when they were 12, when their bond was carefree and innocent. I'd choose a moment like that over 10 pages of smut anyday, as much as I'm concerned. Really one of my fave moments. It was a really good decision to write such a scene at this point in the story. You've planned out everything so perfectly!
I wish you best of luck with the new chaps. I very much enjoyed reading the boy's lives as roomrates, though from the looks of chapter 33 you'll bring in your OCs so the plot should move along?
Hey have you read the new Naruto chapter 343?? *_* Sai tries to spoon feed Naru-chan xD and then Sasuke reveals his true intentions!! I knew it all along that he was just using Orochimaru, not even bastard!sasuke would want to give himself to that psycho -_-
I'm so happy I stumbled on this marvelous story (that's turning out to be THE epic narusasunaru by definition)! I searched for a story like this one everywhere. A maturely written, multi-chaptered story with weekly updates(!). Unbelievable. I adore you so much you're now 2nd if not 1st on my top fave fanfic authors. (Btw in chap33 Naruto says: "that's all your gonna get" it should be "you're" x3)
I could go on and praise non stop about SoD. I think you make a perfect balance between action, crack humour, smut, romance, and angst and your writing style is wonderful and very professional with good consistent chapters.
What really captivates me in this story is the way you develop the whole Naruto and Sasuke relationship (without leaving out the other characters^^). Their relationship keeps growing as physical passion becomes more spiritual^^. Those times when Naruto touches his chest, the two boys are reminded of the same thing and yet they still don't have the courage to face their past wounds. I find those parts so heartbraking!;_;
That scene in chapter 32 where Sasuke sincerely smiles at Naruto and they run through the forest; it was so romantic and soothing. It's just the two of them in their own world reminiscing back to when they were 12, when their bond was carefree and innocent. I'd choose a moment like that over 10 pages of smut anyday, as much as I'm concerned. Really one of my fave moments. It was a really good decision to write such a scene at this point in the story. You've planned out everything so perfectly!
I wish you best of luck with the new chaps. I very much enjoyed reading the boy's lives as roomrates, though from the looks of chapter 33 you'll bring in your OCs so the plot should move along?
Hey have you read the new Naruto chapter 343?? *_* Sai tries to spoon feed Naru-chan xD and then Sasuke reveals his true intentions!! I knew it all along that he was just using Orochimaru, not even bastard!sasuke would want to give himself to that psycho -_-
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I'm gonna tell you my fave parts of the story so far xD
- the convo between Iruka and Kakashi! In canon Kakashi is so high and mighty, so the fact that an academy teacher like Iruka can talk on par with him is a cool thing!
- Sai "socializing" with his team: I was literally lmao it was so funny!! I like how you keep Sai and Shino in character so well x3 Hell, you keep them all so IC it's scary!
- Sai's exclamation "Sasuke may be Naruto's friend but Naruto is mine!" O_o Saying I was pleasantly surprised by this line is an understatement! lol SaiNaru is second best!
- Chapter 17 for obvious reasons *_* All the smut scenes in this story are delicious xD And best of all it's "plot sex" so there's no avoiding it huh? ^_-
- chibi fox Naruto. homg I could have died with the cuteness *_* A white fox with big blue eyes..! +_+
- Chapter 23 (my favourite). There's nothing better than a furious, jealous Sasuke and a teasing Sai. Liked the angst in this.
Scenes that freaked.me.out 0_o:
- The rape featuring Oro and Kyuubi. The vision of a naked Orochimaru made me sick, but you compensated that with a lovely image of human form Kyuubi *ç* smexy <3 Not to mention Oro deserved it *insert evil laugh*
- Oro's wet dream. That was a shocker and it creeped me out. Though the idea of him having a crush on Tsunade is actually kinda cute!
- the convo between Iruka and Kakashi! In canon Kakashi is so high and mighty, so the fact that an academy teacher like Iruka can talk on par with him is a cool thing!
- Sai "socializing" with his team: I was literally lmao it was so funny!! I like how you keep Sai and Shino in character so well x3 Hell, you keep them all so IC it's scary!
- Sai's exclamation "Sasuke may be Naruto's friend but Naruto is mine!" O_o Saying I was pleasantly surprised by this line is an understatement! lol SaiNaru is second best!
- Chapter 17 for obvious reasons *_* All the smut scenes in this story are delicious xD And best of all it's "plot sex" so there's no avoiding it huh? ^_-
- chibi fox Naruto. homg I could have died with the cuteness *_* A white fox with big blue eyes..! +_+
- Chapter 23 (my favourite). There's nothing better than a furious, jealous Sasuke and a teasing Sai. Liked the angst in this.
Scenes that freaked.me.out 0_o:
- The rape featuring Oro and Kyuubi. The vision of a naked Orochimaru made me sick, but you compensated that with a lovely image of human form Kyuubi *ç* smexy <3 Not to mention Oro deserved it *insert evil laugh*
- Oro's wet dream. That was a shocker and it creeped me out. Though the idea of him having a crush on Tsunade is actually kinda cute!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I COMPLETELY FORGOT TO LEAVE A PROPER REVIEWWWWWWWWW
but its ok because you havent posted the next chapter, so i win right?
oh no! you're all the way in america?!
international stalking is damn hard!!!
oh and you have a hubby too? dammit!!!
whoa how old does that make you? (dont have to answer that, but if you're like 40 that would be weird... no offence to the 40 year old fangirls out there!!!!!!!)
ah well i can always steal you away from the hubby by bribing you with my brand new sasuke plushie :D (my friend bought it for my birthday present, and i've told everyone under the sun about it)
right... the chapter i'm meant to be reviewing, XD
seme!sasuke is O_O
i still liked that naruto didnt give up complete control
that chapter left me as a puddle of goo.. so much so that i had to go back and read the end bit just so i know thats happening with the actual plot XD
but its ok because you havent posted the next chapter, so i win right?
oh no! you're all the way in america?!
international stalking is damn hard!!!
oh and you have a hubby too? dammit!!!
whoa how old does that make you? (dont have to answer that, but if you're like 40 that would be weird... no offence to the 40 year old fangirls out there!!!!!!!)
ah well i can always steal you away from the hubby by bribing you with my brand new sasuke plushie :D (my friend bought it for my birthday present, and i've told everyone under the sun about it)
right... the chapter i'm meant to be reviewing, XD
seme!sasuke is O_O
i still liked that naruto didnt give up complete control
that chapter left me as a puddle of goo.. so much so that i had to go back and read the end bit just so i know thats happening with the actual plot XD
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATE GOODNESS
i honestly don't know what it is with guys and sasuke, i kept waving it about trying to get my friend to kiss it and he just gave me this look like i was crazy, i mean c'mon, how could he not want to kiss sasuke?
boys are weird.
you cant kidnap him! its bribing material!!
oh and the plot thickens,
i knew there was a reason why i watched all those god damned evil spawn fillers, it was so i could understand this fic in all its amazing plot glory!!
those fillers have only one redeeming quality XD
i still reviewed in time, which means adi wins! :D
oh and do we get to see more jealous!sasuke ? followed by angry!"you're mine" sex ?
angry jealous sex is the best. probably explains why i love narusasu so much XD
p.s its good to know you're not 40, makes international stalking a little less creepy :)
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I just love your story!! I know I haven't reviewed and stuff...Lately and all but now I am! I wanted to tell you that I love your story! That I cannot wait for your next update! Hopefully soon...LOL I'll ttul! Byes!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm sorry i wasn't able to comment for a while. whoaa, the story's progressing :). i like present sasuke :). and as always, i can't wait till next chapter! it's really amazing how you got me hooked up. well, i expect some fluffy narusasu smut next! ;)