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quick review before class... i loved it! i don't know why, but i did. it was very good, if not exactly exciting. oh! i loved the beginning, when the clone grabbed sasuke's ass. classic. ^.~

hmm their meeting with sesame was tense but informative without giving too much away. i'm glad nothing major happened between sasuke and sesame and that sasuke was able to deter her trying to wring further details from naruto. i worry what will happen once she tells her leader though. *bites nails* also, when DOES sasuke go through his "all things dobe" files? :p

Awww, Naruto needs a hug, and Sasuke is getting much better with his possession issues, such a shame *Smiles wickedly* I do so love a jealous teme. The technique at the beginning will be so kick ass when they get it down. Oh and the grope session was a sweet little tie in. Are you going to write this up until they battle Itachi? What about Akatsuki? And Konoha? Damn, you set this up to be in for the Long haul, talk about Epic, you seriously get props for dedication. Til Saturday, Ja Ne.

Alright, keep them chaps comin'. Very goos one this Teusday too. That was very detailed and informative that parts about the clones, and the jutsu. Oh, and grabbing Sasuke's ass lol. Sesame finally came out and reached Naruto huh very good. Dang...i'm getting worried a lil now. seems like theres a shadow hangin over Naruto at the end there. Very ominous closing line. Well Sasuke will watch over him i'm sure. Hopefully...Anyway, i didn't spot any mistakes! Either that or i really am tired lol. I'm very sleepy for some reason. Can't wait for the next update.

Awesomeness! Can't wait to see what happens next! I do love this story.

You write beautifully T_T... I love all the intereactions between Sasuke and Naruto (LOL and Kyuubi and Oro ;-P) in this fic. *dreamy sigh* Bah. Sesame's a little... irritating. I totally understand Sasuke's annoyance. Shojo characters, grr... *glares at Sesame*. Is she going to be a major character? Can't wait to hear how she knows Naruto XP.

Naruto's last lines had me going cold... It was really effective... and... angsty...

YAAAAAAAY! MOREEEE!!!

OMFG!!!
I think I always start my reviews off like that....
Anyway, I was waiting for your update until I couldn't wait no more and I had to go to work. But as always I rush home and went on line and found your story!!! Thank you.
And YES I am that addicted to Yaoi!
It's just too good!!

I should be less lazy when it comes to reviewing, particularly if I can read 34 chapters of something and take soooo long to actually give feedback. :) (Woops, sorry?)

I've really been enjoying this fic since I started reading it a few weeks ago. Not only is the premise quite original - in the sense that Naruto leaves, rather than have Sasuke returned - but the development of their relationship was well paced. They didn't rush into bed (as many fics end up doing), it was a slow progress as well as a give-and-take between the characters. I like how you've managed their personalities too, particularly Naruto's. He rings quite true (to my own, personal perspective, of course :D) when I read each new chapter.

I'm quite interested in how the plot is moving as well, especially with Naruto's doubled problem with hosting monsters inside his body. Sasuke feels convincing more of the time, except when his thoughts towards Naruto get a bit sappy (again, to my taste). It feels coherent with the story and the setup when he acts like that, but I sometimes have trouble invisioning 'Sasuke' saying this things anyway. But then again... Sasuke is a pain to write, and you do a great job of it already. Keep up the great stuff!

Ooh, I loved that last line that Naruto said. XD

Great chapter, I really enjoyed it! Sesame brought out Jealous!Sasuke once again. Lol, Naruto should keep him on a leash or something (snort)

Anyways, keep up the great work!

Thanks for the links to the fanart!! I hope there will be much more of it to follow, this story deserves it!! :D

I am just so in love with the pace in which Sasuke is falling for Naruto (and also Naruto's reactions to the changes in his teme) - it's not too fast to seem unrealistic, but it isn't slow either. Seems just perfect for his personality, methinks. It's also great to see his opinions shifting from "My goal, my goal, my goal!!" to "Yes, my goal, but the Dobe as well." Hmmm.

And of course the smut was amazing [HOT HOT HOT!!! ^^], you certainly have a gift for vision!! I can never get enough of those two in this! Can't wait till tuesday!