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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god but i do love this story. it's one of the few that can keep my interest in it for more than a few chapters. And i LOVE all that wonderful smut you add which gives it that just right feel to the whole work.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Good shinobi or bad shinobi? Could be from Konoha or from Sound, or perhaps Akatsuki spies? Still, it'd be pretty funny if it were Konoha ninja that tell Tsunade what's going on - poor Sakura if/when she finds out. Hehehe ~ Jelp
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!! Woman, that was the Hottest fucking thing I have EVER EVER EVER read. Oh my freaking GOD!!! or GODDESS as the case may be. I need a minute... Holy SHIT and you stopped in the Middle??? *Deep Breaths* Stress and Distress - Saturday needs to come RIGHT NOW!!!!!!! My brain has Officially been FRIED. OMG.
Okay I've had my minute. Okay, as you tell I like the chapter, who am I kidding I'm ready to have a love affair with the god damn chapter. What a mess, you've made such a mess of me.
Okay two other things - Who are you and where's my bastard? Priceless. and WTF about the end there who was that?
Okay I've had my minute. Okay, as you tell I like the chapter, who am I kidding I'm ready to have a love affair with the god damn chapter. What a mess, you've made such a mess of me.
Okay two other things - Who are you and where's my bastard? Priceless. and WTF about the end there who was that?
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I’ve been reading this fic for some time now and I really appreciate your work!
It’s always nice to know there will be no such thing as cliff hangers.
Your writing style is very good I think and the plot is just as amazing.
I truly consider your story for one of the best naruto fics ever.
Chapter 32 is actually my favourite; in one word: beautiful.
One more thing: pleeeaase keep on with your regular updates.
Ah and don’t mind my mistakes, English is not my first language ;D.
It’s always nice to know there will be no such thing as cliff hangers.
Your writing style is very good I think and the plot is just as amazing.
I truly consider your story for one of the best naruto fics ever.
Chapter 32 is actually my favourite; in one word: beautiful.
One more thing: pleeeaase keep on with your regular updates.
Ah and don’t mind my mistakes, English is not my first language ;D.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what the hell?! friend or foe, dammit?! ah that was so very good. sasuke's first blowjob. we should make a scrapbook! lol i can't wait for the next chapter!! omg, omg!!
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol I always enjoy smex but that Jiraiya comment... priceless
"Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women."
Too Funny, Can't wait until saturday! :)
I wonder who the ninja are...
"Jiraiya pumped full of Viagra and tied to a chair in a room full of beautiful, naked women."
Too Funny, Can't wait until saturday! :)
I wonder who the ninja are...
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMN THAT WAS HOT SMUT
you love me too? great! one step away from marrying you and having your babies XD (just like sasuke)
you update at friday midnight?! O_O i cant stay awake till midnight! i'd die at work the next day, must remove that information from brain XD
today has been such a loooooooooooooooooooooooooong day, i didn't get home until just now!, you're update makes up for it, tuesdays are my busiest day (got labs all day) and your update makes it one of my favourite! :D
so from the similar times i'm guessing you live in england too? for some reason i think all fanfiction writers are american, no idea why.
ok sleepy time for adi, night!
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you love me too? great! one step away from marrying you and having your babies XD (just like sasuke)
you update at friday midnight?! O_O i cant stay awake till midnight! i'd die at work the next day, must remove that information from brain XD
today has been such a loooooooooooooooooooooooooong day, i didn't get home until just now!, you're update makes up for it, tuesdays are my busiest day (got labs all day) and your update makes it one of my favourite! :D
so from the similar times i'm guessing you live in england too? for some reason i think all fanfiction writers are american, no idea why.
ok sleepy time for adi, night!
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That's all I can say... Wow..
That was pure genious, great writing! I love this story!!!! XDXD
Anyways, I can't wait till your next update. Keep up the great work!
That was pure genious, great writing! I love this story!!!! XDXD
Anyways, I can't wait till your next update. Keep up the great work!
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! Love the way Sasuke goes back and forth with his emotions. I am surprised that the Akatsuki haven't been more involved in the fic. I can't wait to (hopefully) see Naruto and Sasuke defeat Itachi together! Keep writing. ~ Jelp
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've never been this thrilled after reading NaruSasu fiction ever since Conviction and SelfReliance. I'm so glad that even with the amount of sex (yum yum) they're still at least IC imho. Not just, OMGWTFHIS, "love you 'Ruto." "U 2 Suke." The way you develop them is flawless because understanding comes not in a zap. Doesn't matter if they already know ALL about each other.
Can't wait to see what'll happen next. Orochimaru won't give up just like that right? Also, will they ever meet other Konoha ninja, besides sai's team because Rice Field Country is just right next to the Fire Country according to the official map.
I love you even more (not it that way) for not making them both uber unbeatable ninja who can kick everyone's ass in an instant. And hurray for seme!Naruto XD I don't care much about who gets it up in the ass but yes, I think sasuke makes a better uke ^^ hey it rhymed.
Who was the group of shinobi that Naruto saw? Were they Akatsuki? Hm, I hope Sasuke's part to stake his prize is coming soon *cackles evilly*
I'm soo gonna reccomend this on my journal and waiting for the next TONFA award so I can nominate you. The last ones I nominated won a few ^_~ so it doesn't hurt to try ne.
~ m a y ~
Can't wait to see what'll happen next. Orochimaru won't give up just like that right? Also, will they ever meet other Konoha ninja, besides sai's team because Rice Field Country is just right next to the Fire Country according to the official map.
I love you even more (not it that way) for not making them both uber unbeatable ninja who can kick everyone's ass in an instant. And hurray for seme!Naruto XD I don't care much about who gets it up in the ass but yes, I think sasuke makes a better uke ^^ hey it rhymed.
Who was the group of shinobi that Naruto saw? Were they Akatsuki? Hm, I hope Sasuke's part to stake his prize is coming soon *cackles evilly*
I'm soo gonna reccomend this on my journal and waiting for the next TONFA award so I can nominate you. The last ones I nominated won a few ^_~ so it doesn't hurt to try ne.
~ m a y ~