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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Iiik, just to clearify, I think the smut is great, so don't missread the 'beside the smut' line ^^;
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! i love your story so much!
i love your long and detailed description about what the characters feel and think at that moment. the swtiching of POV's are actually very informative, as they give a different perspective on the same event.
for chp 1-29: i laughed a little, i cried a little, nosebled here and there, and loved every moment. sasuke in denial was hilarious; him being jealous was even more precious! naruto's amazingly strong, sometimes its hard to equate his happy-go-lucky attitude with the fact that he currently houses two of history's most notorious killers, the kyuubi and orochimaru. i love how kyuubi sorta gets a play toy; its nonconsensual and wrong, but then again, somewhat understandable given the fact that kyuubi's probably bored being traped for so many years. orochimaru's so funny... he even whimpers... i dont know if he deserves the punishment he's getting, but compared to all the evil sins and experiments he was in charge of, i can't seem to find a better ending to him (i hope he doesn't re-surface)
for ch 30: i love your version of sai! he says the best and worst possible things! and for the development of narusasunaru, i can't wait to see sasuke fall deeper in love! XD i'd love to see sasuke get jealous all over again; maybe with sesame? with sai again? with another OC? a jealous sasuke is the best yet cuz it just goes to show how much he loves naruto!
can't wait for the saturday update, i hope sasuke and naruto get their argument resolved and sasuke can finally accept that naruto's a skilled ninja. its kinda ironic; sasuke can only accept someone he respects as strong and capable, but then he can't stand when naruto shows signs of true skill. newaz; i look forward to ur next update!
i love your long and detailed description about what the characters feel and think at that moment. the swtiching of POV's are actually very informative, as they give a different perspective on the same event.
for chp 1-29: i laughed a little, i cried a little, nosebled here and there, and loved every moment. sasuke in denial was hilarious; him being jealous was even more precious! naruto's amazingly strong, sometimes its hard to equate his happy-go-lucky attitude with the fact that he currently houses two of history's most notorious killers, the kyuubi and orochimaru. i love how kyuubi sorta gets a play toy; its nonconsensual and wrong, but then again, somewhat understandable given the fact that kyuubi's probably bored being traped for so many years. orochimaru's so funny... he even whimpers... i dont know if he deserves the punishment he's getting, but compared to all the evil sins and experiments he was in charge of, i can't seem to find a better ending to him (i hope he doesn't re-surface)
for ch 30: i love your version of sai! he says the best and worst possible things! and for the development of narusasunaru, i can't wait to see sasuke fall deeper in love! XD i'd love to see sasuke get jealous all over again; maybe with sesame? with sai again? with another OC? a jealous sasuke is the best yet cuz it just goes to show how much he loves naruto!
can't wait for the saturday update, i hope sasuke and naruto get their argument resolved and sasuke can finally accept that naruto's a skilled ninja. its kinda ironic; sasuke can only accept someone he respects as strong and capable, but then he can't stand when naruto shows signs of true skill. newaz; i look forward to ur next update!
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You had to stop there right? I want to read the next chapter soon... I couldn't stop reading your story until I was at the current chapter... it's soooo great^^ I have read it from the morning till the evening just so I could finish it and now I want mooooore... so... yeah... I hope you update soon *smile*
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is the perfect Valentines Day gift to myself. It's so rare that you find a story that has an incredibly original plot that fits perfectly into the Narutoverse, has characterization down to a tee, and has hot sex. Beautiful. This is probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read. LOVE! I get to keep reading now. ^^
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very, very dramatic! omg, is naruto going to kick sasuke's ass now? i'd pay to see that. but, if he uses that wind chakra rasengan, won't it get out of control like it usually does and send him inside his own head? and won't that give orochimaru a chance to break free? jesus, i'm filled with worry and dread now! man, this story is so good! saturday better get here fast! i want more!
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know stupid sasuke just ruined the chance we had of getting a hot sex scene!!! GRRR! he is so stupid sometimes! Anyways, i loved Sai in this story i always felt he got a bab reputation but i like him. Still it always has to be Sasuke and Naruto together.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I did miss the smex, this chapter was a good transition chapter. Very good!
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is a big bastard. I hope Naruto kicks some sense into him.
Another well done chapter, I have a feeling that Sai and Co. will find Naruto and Sasuke- I'm almost positive.
Wonder how Sasuke and Naruto's fight's gonna turn out. UPDATE SOON!
Another well done chapter, I have a feeling that Sai and Co. will find Naruto and Sasuke- I'm almost positive.
Wonder how Sasuke and Naruto's fight's gonna turn out. UPDATE SOON!
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Naruto is going to kick Sasuke's ass, huh? Can't wait! :D I also can't wait to read the lemon where Sasuke is the seme. It's about time he gave Naruto some loving back. ;)
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great NaruSasu scene! It is just like Sasuke to get pissed that Naruto is so strong and find something to blame it on...I love how you stay so IC. I'm kinda tired of all the OOC stories out there. No pressure or anything, but: keep up the good work!