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your chapters always leave me hooked and this one is no exception. what are you going to do about sakura. can't wait til saturday (it takes the place of saturday morning cartoons i have all of the good ones). for that i thank you.

I'm sitting here, reading and reading and loving this story and checking for updates daily (I know you are rather systematical with your updates but I like to check incase) and I just realised I haven't reviewed the last few chapters at all. How lame is that? Anyway. The story is great. The only reason I haven't reveiwed is becaues everytime theres a hot smex scene I get distracted and forget that whole 'coherent review' thingy.

Anyway. No Smex, so here I am reviewing all the while! Still excellent, still well writing, still has me on the edge of my seat. Your almost inspiring me to write some Naruto Sasuke stuff, but my last attempt ending with... well no attention worth mentioning I'm loath to bother (isn't that so lazy of me?). Anyway I'm rambling. Keep up the great work!

Kimra

I love this chapter alot. I think it hit home once again just how serious this is in the story. Naruto's well being is certainly not something to take lightly. It is nice to know though that Kiba, Sai, and crew want to help him so badly. He doesn't deserve to be used as a tool. That part with Sai was just soooo funny. I Lol'd. I think you got him down pat. Anyway, Sasuke. Sigh. Instead of being such a dick he needs to be grateful someone is willing to be by his side. Is it gonna take for Sasuke to loose Naruto again for him to realize that Naruto is precious and he should have some consideration for him, that the dobe is willing to be there for him if he treats him like an equal. Such an ego i tell ya. He has a funky way of thinking. That one of Naruto's thoughts where he says he would show Sasuke what he'd learned while he was off being Orochimaru’s little bitch had me lol'ing. Damn right.

Anyway, i gotta say though, though he frustrates me, you do have Sasuke down to the T, i feel. He often is contradictory without even realizing it. On the one hand he cares for him ALOT, wants to sex him up ALOT, and admires the power within Naruto ALOT. And yet, he has trouble voicing his need and continually deludes himself into thinking it isn't love, has the UBER hots for him and yet stops himself often so that he doesn't look like a wimp, and knocks Naruto down because of his own insecurity of being inferior to Naruto. Baka. He needs to be taught some lessons bad.

Anyway, enough of my rants, thats the longest one ive ever given lol. There's just one small grammar thing i caught and that was where it says, "Growling under his breath, he tossed the blankets off and stalked towards the bathroom, unmindful of his unclothes state." I think you meant "unclothed". I'm so good at this :). Anyway, can't wait till Saturday for the next update.

Agh! Cliffie!!! (for the Sasuke/Naruto scene T_T)

Both naruto and Sasuke are so stubborn. They're both driving me crazy (which i really, really appreciate by the way--it makes for an excellent story). I continue to admire your timely updates and I love that you were able to re-pick up the Sai et. al. mission thread without it feeling forced or messing with the flow of the story. The way you wrote it, it just *fit*. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I can't wait until Saturday!

Lol, you know what, you're gonna hate me for this. Out of curiousity i saw this story back up at the top so i assumed you'd edited that error i told u about and you did, which is kool.......But i noticed a teeny tiny other one right when i was reading the line you'd corrected. Where it says "He bit back an oath as he felt he aching hardness between his own thighs..." near the previous corrected line. You might have meant "the" or his". I don't know. Thought you should know. Lol, sowwy.

I'm so happy!!
I'm so happy!!
I'm so happy!!
I woke up this morning and the first thing that came to mind was, "It's Tuesday!! The story is up!It's Tuesday!! The story is up!" Then I proceeded to rush over to the computer to get my fill of the Naru/Sasu tastiness! I love the tension between Sasuke and Naruto. I love how you are keeping the characters in character! I love how you have Sasuke fighting with his feeling about Naruto. It just seems that it would all fit if it was really apart of the story, you know what I mean? Anyways, I gotta go and do some homework before I go to class. I hope the next chapter will have them resolved their issues and then some good old fashion smexy goodness!

aww, an argument between lovers! i can imagine the two quarrel a lot. damn pride ;p. and we all know there's a reconciliation after an argumnet, and that usually involves sex!
i would write more but i'm in a hurry, so bah. till next time :). please, keep up the good job :)!

aaaaaaaah, i LOVED how sasuke woke up. it was sooo contented post-coital morning. made me smile. too bad he still wouldn't give into his desires, but his thoughts of wanting naruto in his mouth had a damn hot description nontheless ^_~ and then glaring at naruto because he didn't show up during his shower this time--that was cute!! nyahaha *sigh* too bad he's still got those condescending superiority tendencies.. but then, it wouldn't be sasuke if he didn't, ne? he just.. really needs to think about what he says to goad naruto sometimes >.> and now that naruto's skill without kyuubi has basically been challenged.. is he gonna do his new rasengan while the chakra barrier is down??!! *bites nails*

omg but then, sai's childbearing comment to takako was HILARIOUS. and like hinata, ya gotta wonder sometimes if he really doesn't know what he's doing XD ahh, i love that boy :p now that EVERYONE on the search team knows the circumstances of naruto and what the council wants him so badly for, i wonder what they'll decide to do once they do run into him again.....

yet another awesome chapter. wheeeeeee!!

Another wonderful chapter! Gods I just love Naruto, Sai, and Sasuke. It really is amazing how you keep them in character like that. I'm glad you like my stories. No, actually I'm honored.

Feelings directly after Sai's speech: T^T Narutoooo~!

That was one wake-up call for the others. Way to go Sai ^^'';

And I love how his loaylty towards Naruto is so evident here. He's supposed to not have any emotions, but Naruto really is a soft spot for him. I love how you use that in his way to talk about him; as if he trusts him completely, without doubt. So much love <3

And Naruto's responce when setting the rules for the bet made me snort tea on my screen, damn you! Once again, Naruto has proved to us all why he is called Konoha's Number One Surprising Ninja XD ...bet Sasuke didn't see that one coming. But equal trade is very important in a relationship, Sasu-chan ^^b You can't expect to be on the receiving end all the time!

The way Naruto said it... Hot damn. And DAMN the boys for being completely incapable of getting along nicely for any longer time. You could be having hot steamign sex right now, dammit! D:

But cookies for you for still keeping them In Character through all this. *hugs!*