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H-half of my review dissapeared. And it was the good half, too :O

P-please, if you want to hear the rest. Just e-mail me, and I'll write an even better one.

Aw, man...SAI is love!!!!!! I think he reminds me a bit of Kakashi.And his loyalty to Naruto. Mmmm..As much as I am a SasuNaru fan (when Sasuke isn't being too dickheaded and Naruto not reminding too much of Jiraya) I would looooove to see a bit of SaiNaru. XD Funny that Naruto's "friends" never figured out the demon part.
Great job. I look forward to more. :-)

~KaraQ

...I was waiting for the whole "hand-through-chest" thing to show up again - very important part of their past, that. How can Sasuke be such a bastard and I still love him so much?!?

And for the record, Sai is all kinds of win! ^^

i LOVE sai

this chapter was great as usual
and you hit the big 3-0!!!!!! CONGRATS! though you probably hit 30 chapters AGESSSSSSSSSS ago
i dont think i've ever read a fic longer than 30 chapters!
thats a heck of a lot of writing!

heres the funny thing, i looked forward to your update more than the end of the fillers and actual naruto story line returning XD

hope you're feeling better!

okay - Sasuke, some words for you - DUMBASS STOP THINKING ABOUT IT AND JUST DO IT! SUCK THAT COCK BOY! and on a separate rant I think you just missed out on your chance to have a willing Naruto begging to be fucked beneath you, for a Loong time to come, Boge.

Now Questions for Zrina =
1. Ramen land. Is that anywhere near La La land? XD
2. O.o... the Dobe has a sorting system??

In other areas - Hard work wins over genius yet again. And Aww, that's soo Sweet everbody wants to help.

As for Wrong Number - Well tie me up, kick me off a cliff, and call me a Dobe - How the hell did I miss that?? I'm such an idiot!
Anyway Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou I'm off to read that right NOW.

Wow...the first part with kyuubi, orochi, and naruto made me shiver - was very erotic and disturbing, you did great with that though! And the sasuke/naruto loving was perfect I thought, I really loved Sasuke's POV through all of that. Can't wait for more. I really, really get excited everytime this story gets updated, I haven't read a fic this good in so long. I love you, Zrina!! :D :D

Hmmm, do I detect a bit of foreshadowing? This was an extremely interesting chapter for several reasons. Even though I despise Orochimaru, I couldn’t help but feel bad about Kyuubi’s treatment of him. Then again I also think that Orochimaru is a masochist so maybe he’s kinda into the whole non-consensual thing but then again I really don’t like to speculate much on that subject. I’m going to half-hazard a guess that the “hero” that was mentioned is going to be Naruto, and that that’s going to piss Sasuke off in some way or other. It will certainly be interesting to see where the latest turn will take this story. As always, fantastic job on the chapter and congratulations on getting 1,000 hits per chapter. That is most definitely something to be proud of. My best wishes for you and your writing.

Hello,

just another bunch of wonderfull chapters. Your style is descriptive and warm and I like it very much. And I'm also a great fan of NaruxSasu or NaruxSasuxNaru with a more "dominant" (if you want to call it that way... though I don't think dominance plays any role during their sexual intercourses... perhaps "active" will be a better word...) Naruto.

I could keep on writing how much I like your innnovative ideas, your vivid dialogues and tension building, your way to write both hot and adorable lemons and still post twice a week long chapters - but we won't to grow your ego too much, ne ;D

Keep writing such wonderful stories and chapters
Nathaniel

On a sidenote: Your short fic with Kiba convinving Naruto to call Sakura and confess and ending up calling Sasuke was hilarious and one of the most funniest thing I've ever read here here on aff.net. Just to let you know, because I'm a lazy guy and reviewing twice is troublesome :D

*teary-eyed* NOOOOOOO!! I wanted another chapter!!!! T-T
God your story's good. I like the way that you have very realistic characters, and the way you explore both of their thoughts and their reasons for why they do what they do. It'll be interesting to see how it all pans out. *grins* Please update soon!

another great chapter. i have a question is sesame (mispelled) fuuma the girl who's cousin that naruto and sakura was not able to save. can't wait for another update.