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that was hot!

omg, HOT chapter again *pants, drools, nosebleeds* very awesome... maybe i'm a bit messed up but i loved how naruto got all hot and bothered from seeing kyuubi fuck oro.. well, the overpowering waves of lust coming through to him help with that, ne, but twas still hot >.> also, the way he "attacked" sasuke in the shower was even HOTTER, and i love that sasuke is just a bit on the masochistic side and likes a bit of a dangerous lusty naruto (even if he still won't fully/consciously admit it, damn him :p) and his vow to himself that next time he'd be in control totally went out the window lol! but it's also awesome how powerfully he feels for naruto. omg, when naruto told him to tell him what he wants, and all the thoughts sasuke had that he refused to voice--kyaaaa, i LOVE that!! i love THEM!! *dies*

i don't have to tell you anything, do i?

Ooo, I liked those last lines there, very cool and heroic!

Nice chapter, I LOVED the shower scene. Poor Sasuke, even after he vowed to be seme, he ends up uke. :D:D:D

Awesome chapter, I really liked it. Can't wait till you update again! It looks like things are about to get interesting.

wow... that was hot!

Ya, another great chappie. And it started off rather interestingly. Hmmmm..lol. Oro is recieving his penance in a rather interesting type of hell. Well eitherway it lead to one hot smut scene there that i thoroughly enjoyed reading. Too bad Sasuke couldn't bring himself to say what was on his mind. It'll be interesting the day he does. That dumb Uchiha pride i telll ya. And awesome, you have just created another subplot there! With this Sesame and Katsuro thing. And who shall this much needed savior be?? Hmmmm? Very nifty indeed.

There was one grammatical thing i managed to catch where you wrote, "He then drug the older boy's mouth to his and devoured it". I think you meant he 'dragged'. Unless you literally meant he drugged his mouth and then devoured it lol, which was a twist i didn't get. Anyway update soon ya hear!!

Hooray for SMEX!! Damn it looks like the boys have hit their stride, HARD, that was H-O-T-T, HOT!!! Loved it and I loved the tidbit of Kyuu/Oro, make that bastard beg for it XD. Do you think Sasuke will ever voice those feelings? I really really want Naruto to know, that paragraph alone was smoking. You've proved it girly. You are the triple threat - Sweet, Funny and Steamy!! Hell I even love your action sequences, and the plot is DAMN good. YOU ROCK MY SOCKS, clean off my feet. I'm totally hearting you right now.

Oh just a little aside, what ever happened to Wrong Number? I miss it, pwease update? Pretty please with cherries and strawberries and whipped cream and all that good shit.

It is getting harder and harder to leave reviews to you because I am always left speechless after reading your updates. I loved it. That's all I can say. I'm sorry...

would that hero happen to be the very one that now hosts that legendary snake sannin? how ironic. this chapter was AWESOME!! i was scared last chapter that orochimaru would escape, but i guess kyuubi put a stop to that by... incapacitating him. i look foward to the next chapter!!

I loved the after-sex "pillow talk". lol. The images that come to mind!
This is a great fic.