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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why do i always have to post my reviews in parts in order to get it work properly ;< Oh well, you got my message (i hope so :0) and that's all that matters :) sorry for making your review list look disordered :/
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The Sound of Dreams" is wonderful, and I can't believe that this is the first time I have run across it. What ever you are doing keep it up, your pacing of the story is perfect and characters are very believable. Thanks for this, I look forward to seeing more of this story.
Anarawells
Anarawells
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow you did two chapters since the last time i checked sweet we readers appreciate your hard work. and i thought your all lemon page rocked especially how sasuke was emotionally freeballing by the end. i can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww sasukes gone all pissy XD
great chapter!
i didnt know that about your beta, having a guy with no interest in yaoi read your work must give it a different perspective i guess, and helps to keep the characters IC
i love narusasu, but maybe let sasuke top so hes not so moody and with serious "im-not-a-girl" issues XD
you are without a doubt my most favourite authour. i am your official fangirl
*gives you her lost rolo*
great chapter!
i didnt know that about your beta, having a guy with no interest in yaoi read your work must give it a different perspective i guess, and helps to keep the characters IC
i love narusasu, but maybe let sasuke top so hes not so moody and with serious "im-not-a-girl" issues XD
you are without a doubt my most favourite authour. i am your official fangirl
*gives you her lost rolo*
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first words: oh shit. you have GOT to kill that snake-bastard off!! i can't stand him!!!! i mean, wouldn't kyuubi be able to eat him or something for trying to escape? anyway. i liked this chapter, especially sasuke's realization that he can't leave naruto, regardless of whatever petty reasoning he puts behind it. keep up the fantastic work!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I should be worried about poor Naruto and his seal troubles, which I am...deep...deep down ^.^, a part of me just can't stop snickering about Naruto's inexplicable ability to say the wrong thing... Over... and Over again.
But! Besides all that I just wanted to finally review and say I faint all over you in fangirl love. X3 This is actually the only fic where I'll read Seme-Naruto. O:...Even if I did pout (quit literally... *pathetic) for a few minutes when I read teh smut. But you're just such a great writer, with such an amazing plot line, and they're so IC I could just faint all over you once again. 8D
...*does faint all over you again*
But! Besides all that I just wanted to finally review and say I faint all over you in fangirl love. X3 This is actually the only fic where I'll read Seme-Naruto. O:...Even if I did pout (quit literally... *pathetic) for a few minutes when I read teh smut. But you're just such a great writer, with such an amazing plot line, and they're so IC I could just faint all over you once again. 8D
...*does faint all over you again*
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! NO! poor sasuke he is in love! but man he is pridefull.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story so much. That was an awesome chapter. The interaction between Sasuke and Naruto is dead on, from reading your authors notes, I can see that you have some of your beta to think for that. I laughed when you said he response to the more intimate scenes are "yeah, I can see that happeneing"! I really admire you. I think you are doing a great job with this story. I'll be a reader until the very end no matter what happens in it. Take care.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto never fails to make me laugh, I love this chapter, and I knew Sasuke would go back to being angry and depressed! Can't wait until your next update!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! that was like the cliff hanger of the century... Grrr, stupid Orochimaru, damn Kyuubi, did he get out?? which one got out? The description of Orochimaru pushing, fit him perfectly, it totally skeeved me out *shudders*. Okay now to exercise my patience, and just wait for Saturday.
In other news:
VIVA LA YAOI!! and LOL to your Beta, why do all the boys hate Sasuke? My brother and I fight about that all the time.
On the issue of keeping them apart - Don't, it makes it more real, they're in the honeymoon stage of their relationship, everything's new. Them all over each other all the time is how it's supposed to be.
Oh and the wife comment was a classic, too bad Sasuke didn't feel the need to drag the dobe off and prove his manliness in the time honoured fashion *wink wink* XD. But then again you have to wonder about that old saying "Shut up and take it like a Man!" *Smirk*
In other news:
VIVA LA YAOI!! and LOL to your Beta, why do all the boys hate Sasuke? My brother and I fight about that all the time.
On the issue of keeping them apart - Don't, it makes it more real, they're in the honeymoon stage of their relationship, everything's new. Them all over each other all the time is how it's supposed to be.
Oh and the wife comment was a classic, too bad Sasuke didn't feel the need to drag the dobe off and prove his manliness in the time honoured fashion *wink wink* XD. But then again you have to wonder about that old saying "Shut up and take it like a Man!" *Smirk*