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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great going Naruto. The worst possible thing he could've said to Sasuke and he said it. (sighs)
Awesome chapter, I liked it. What's going to happen to Naruto??? I hope he gets control over his deamon/enemy.
Update soon.
Awesome chapter, I liked it. What's going to happen to Naruto??? I hope he gets control over his deamon/enemy.
Update soon.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you sure did a great job with this chapter. (Just like the other ones ^^b)
Sasuke is very much in character, it is very fun to see how he is handling the changes in his and Naruto's relationship, and how he's finally been able to admit something like his own feelings to himself. Like even HAVING feeling >__>''
The next step is to learn to act on the tender impulses. I imagine that that will take a while, especially efter that last...comment (way to go Naruto *rolls eyes*), but I have faith in your Sasuke, and in your abaility to write him.
Thank you, once again, for sharing. I enjoyed this very much ^^
Sasuke is very much in character, it is very fun to see how he is handling the changes in his and Naruto's relationship, and how he's finally been able to admit something like his own feelings to himself. Like even HAVING feeling >__>''
The next step is to learn to act on the tender impulses. I imagine that that will take a while, especially efter that last...comment (way to go Naruto *rolls eyes*), but I have faith in your Sasuke, and in your abaility to write him.
Thank you, once again, for sharing. I enjoyed this very much ^^
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter. i told you how i love it that they come out regularly, right? :) it always makes me happy that you don't have to wait for months, which sadly happens to other good stories out there.
aww, sasuke sure can be grumpy, can't he? damn his uchiha pride. i like how you portray his distance to naruto, it seems like a thing he would do.
oh, now the kyuubi comes out. i can't wait for an update :).
aww, sasuke sure can be grumpy, can't he? damn his uchiha pride. i like how you portray his distance to naruto, it seems like a thing he would do.
oh, now the kyuubi comes out. i can't wait for an update :).
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NOES!!! I mean I knew it was coming sooner or later, but then there were so many WAFF chapters that I kind of went into denial that Orochimaru would ever be a problem again. Wah! I don't want him to be a problem again! And yet I do...but that's only because I know that you'll write it so well. I'm really nervous now. I want and don't want to know what's going to happen all at the same time.
Also, I thought that that line about being the wife was brilliantly executed. Most people would've had Sasuke punch Naruto or all attack Naruto. I'm glad you didn't. It added something subtle. I will have to contemplate what that something is.
I bow to your superior updating skills.
Hugs and cyber cookies!
Also, I thought that that line about being the wife was brilliantly executed. Most people would've had Sasuke punch Naruto or all attack Naruto. I'm glad you didn't. It added something subtle. I will have to contemplate what that something is.
I bow to your superior updating skills.
Hugs and cyber cookies!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, what happened there? Is Oro making his presence known? Sasuke better watch over his dobe!!! Honestly, he's such a fool sometimes. Wait till something serious happens to Naruto and then he'll be lamenting like a baby. Men, phtt. Anyway, it was a good chapter. A bridge chapter i like to call it, that basically leads on to a bigger event.
I totally understand about your writing happenstance. Sometimes writing doesn't always go according to plan. But u know alot of the best writing is accidental and sometimes it's good to go with the flow and incorporate it into the story. It really does often take on a life of its own. Don't worry over much about it, because if it feels right then it'll reflect on your work and it'll be good to the audience. Also i'm glad you don't think it too anal of me to point out the grammar mistakes. I just can't help it lol. I'm a perfectionist. Update soon!!!
I totally understand about your writing happenstance. Sometimes writing doesn't always go according to plan. But u know alot of the best writing is accidental and sometimes it's good to go with the flow and incorporate it into the story. It really does often take on a life of its own. Don't worry over much about it, because if it feels right then it'll reflect on your work and it'll be good to the audience. Also i'm glad you don't think it too anal of me to point out the grammar mistakes. I just can't help it lol. I'm a perfectionist. Update soon!!!
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!
Your story is THE BEST Naruto fanfiction I have EVER read in my whole life. You have an absolutely amazing storyline and the emotions in the story is simply incredible. I sort of stumbled upon this story when I decided to take a look at Naruto fanfictions. After reading one chapter, I was HOOKED!!! I could not stop reading and basically glued myself to the computor. Many MANY hours later, I finished it up to the current chapter. Now, exhausted, I write this review for this amazing work of literary art. Thank you for gracing the Earth (and AFF.net) with your presence and story. Thanks again for reading my lousy review since I can't express how much I love this story. I will say that I ran around squeeling several times during the course of reading it and hit my head many times due to the fact I glomped the computer. Anyway please keep on writing. I will check on this story as much as possible but due to and evil computor who hates me and evil dial up, I won't be that succesful. But I'll try. I'm also going to recommend this to my friends but they might faint or collapse due to the current length of your story. Thanks again for reading my review.
Aki WildQueen
P.S. What is the schedule for updates again? somewhere in one of the chapters you mention it but due to my speed reading and terrible memory, I forgot it. If you could be so kind and write it in your author's note I would be eternally grateful. Oh yeah, before I forget. Mr. and Mrs. Bunny also LOVED your story.
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I LOVE YOU!!!
Your story is THE BEST Naruto fanfiction I have EVER read in my whole life. You have an absolutely amazing storyline and the emotions in the story is simply incredible. I sort of stumbled upon this story when I decided to take a look at Naruto fanfictions. After reading one chapter, I was HOOKED!!! I could not stop reading and basically glued myself to the computor. Many MANY hours later, I finished it up to the current chapter. Now, exhausted, I write this review for this amazing work of literary art. Thank you for gracing the Earth (and AFF.net) with your presence and story. Thanks again for reading my lousy review since I can't express how much I love this story. I will say that I ran around squeeling several times during the course of reading it and hit my head many times due to the fact I glomped the computer. Anyway please keep on writing. I will check on this story as much as possible but due to and evil computor who hates me and evil dial up, I won't be that succesful. But I'll try. I'm also going to recommend this to my friends but they might faint or collapse due to the current length of your story. Thanks again for reading my review.
Aki WildQueen
P.S. What is the schedule for updates again? somewhere in one of the chapters you mention it but due to my speed reading and terrible memory, I forgot it. If you could be so kind and write it in your author's note I would be eternally grateful. Oh yeah, before I forget. Mr. and Mrs. Bunny also LOVED your story.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHH nooooo!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my superbowl weekend is over (yay colts!) and this was the first thing i read when i logged on. that was just perfect. and the last line completely melted my heart!! i love this story so much! i can't wait for tuesday!!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon!! I loved how at the end, Sasuke realized he couldn't deny their bond anymore. :)
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was sooooooooo Hot so worth the wait oh my goodness now you have todo more man on man action because if that was just the beginning ...(Pauses to wipe blood away from nose) just WOW i can't wait for the next chapter of this i can only imagine how much more intense it will be after they tell each other how they feel for one another. Once again can't wait till Tuesday for the next update hopefully more naked Sasuke...(wipes drool away from mouth) ...And Naked Naruto ...XD You are officially my favorite writer on Aff.net.