rate_review Reviews

I just love this story, but i'm sure you hear that a lot. It is hard to find good NaruSasu stories, but that is my favorite pairing and you do a great job! I know it is NaruSasuNaru, but it hasnt evolved into that yet, so.... I love you!

that was HAWT.

omg. i hope you update again soon. (^ _ ^)

;_; Hoooomg. I am actually crying a little. The entire chapter was freaking gorgeous, as always, but that last bit... *turns into a snivelling baby* That was so.... I want to say cute. But it wasn't cute. It was...

Well it gave me the warm and fuzzies, at any rate. *happy sigh*
Looking forward to the next chapter. x3 Thank you for the great reading!

YESSS!!!! they finally did it! and oh god, did i love it or what. really this is my most fav fic ever. i can't wait until you update again.

Erotic. That is the absolute best way to describe chapter 27: flat-out erotic. I was thoroughly pleased with this chapter and the way you chose to portray both Naruto and Sasuke in the chapter. You did a great job and I can’t help but feel we’ve hit a climax (excuse the pun), or at least a significant turning point in the story. I’m definitely curious to see how they both handle the shift in their relationship; now that Sasuke has finally admitted that he and Naruto are “bound together”, and how this will affect the rest of the story. As always, I look forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and in regards to you’re AN, I would just like to say as a fellow reader who has the misfortune of liking stories that are irregularly updated, I appreciate that you keep to an “update schedule”, as opposed to posting everything you have at once. I would rather you keep to your schedule and not get stressed out about writing chapters as fast as you can. After all, you do have a life outside of AFF, and people don’t generally tend to write their best work when they are more focused about writing a chapter as opposed to the actual content of the chapter. This of course is not a reflection of your work because you allow yourself the time to write something that is well written, well structured, and well thought out and I would like nothing more than to see this continued. Therefore it is my opinion that quality over quantity is best. Don’t succumb to peer pressure, everything is fine the way it is. My absolute best wishes for you and your writing.

YEAH!!! YEAH!!Yeah!!! Yeah!!! I have waited soooooooooo long for this moment!!! Hell yeah!! and you want to know what the best part of the whole thing was?!?!? Naruto was SEME!!! Hell yeah!! Even if it just for now because Sasuke didn't have the experience to do it, I think it's still HOT that he was SEME!!! ......sigh....now that I have that out of my system, I just wanted to say that I love your story....I think that I said that the last time. You have no idea how happy I was to find that you updated already!!! I was jumping up and down for joy at that thought of reading your next HOT chapter!!! No, really I was and my roommates looked at me like I was crazy! Ha ha ha ha showed them......anyways, I'll be waiting on hands and knees (snickers) for you next update!


Shosuro

SQUEEEE!!! Have I ever told you how much I totally LOVE you!!??!! *Bows down and kisses Zrina's feet* That was such a mix of exasperation, hilarity, steaminess and sweetness, I think my brain has gone into meltdown.

OMG... At the beginning I totally wanted to swat Sasuke in the back of his head, but I totally agree, he would be an idiot about it, LOL! Then I was all "Holy Crap! This is getting HOT!!"

But my favourtie, My ABSOLUTE favourite, was this:

Sasuke didn't dare try to move out of Naruto's embrace. He barely dared to breathe. He could feel himself at the very edge of a fragile cliff and he was afraid of falling off.

Cause, my brain did me a wickedness and sent me a very clear picture of a chibi me whistling happily, hands clasped innocently behind my back, walking up to Sasuke and kicking his ass off the cliff XD. I almost died of laughter, and then I read on, and my heart clenched cause of the sweetness. Bound together, oh yeah, BELIEVE IT! with the red silk ties like in all the doujinshis :D.

I'm so Happy *Sighs, with hearts in my eyes and stars floating around my head* I'm going to be grinning like an idiot all freaking day :D - not that I mind.

I had to hold a breath the whole way through reading this. I think I might have died and come back about three times. This was so many things...hot, sexy, beautiful, passionate...whew...I felt like I was watching a movie. It was simply amazing. It was perfect in every way!

fuck! that was great! sasuke is whip!

and sasuke slowly steps out of denial
i would write more
but im gonna be late for work!
great work!
*offers cake*