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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gosh i loved this lemon!! it was sooo....intense...in the middle of enjoying though my cd writer made a crazy npise and i got jerked out of the feel of the whole thing and had to read it all over again!!! anyway update soon ja ne!!
Taka
Taka
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods... My head's spinning. That was waaaay intense. Totally amazing.
I love how caring Naruto is through the entire thing. You've managed to once again prove to me why these two are my OTP, why I just can't see Sasuke together with anyone else (I can see Naruto with others, sometimes, but for Sasuke there's no one else - that's how I feel ^^'';); he wouldn't ever allow anyone else to seehim in the vulnerable state one's in while havign sex. He wouldn't let go like that with anyone else. Ever.
I think that you're getting better. I sat down to re-read the first chapters to make sure that I wasn't just imagining things, but I really think that your writing keeps getting better and better. Makes me really excited, since you've already told us all that you're many chapters ahead in this story. I can't wait to keep reading, to get to follow you in this and see how much more you grow/have grown, and what will come of the story.
Thank you for sharing. Hugs! /elict
I love how caring Naruto is through the entire thing. You've managed to once again prove to me why these two are my OTP, why I just can't see Sasuke together with anyone else (I can see Naruto with others, sometimes, but for Sasuke there's no one else - that's how I feel ^^'';); he wouldn't ever allow anyone else to seehim in the vulnerable state one's in while havign sex. He wouldn't let go like that with anyone else. Ever.
I think that you're getting better. I sat down to re-read the first chapters to make sure that I wasn't just imagining things, but I really think that your writing keeps getting better and better. Makes me really excited, since you've already told us all that you're many chapters ahead in this story. I can't wait to keep reading, to get to follow you in this and see how much more you grow/have grown, and what will come of the story.
Thank you for sharing. Hugs! /elict
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I liked that last line, a very cool way to end an AWSOMELY HOT chapter. (dabs tissue on nose). It was definetly worth the wait. Great job. Now, if you will excuse me I have to go get something to help with bloodloss.
UPDATE SOON!
UPDATE SOON!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love it! and it was a narusasu too! i'm so happy! i think i'll cry from happiness now ;___;
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Big Event!! What I've been waiting for and as always it was great! Can't wait untill the next chapter and see how they deal with the 'awkwardness' or maybe they'll just be comfortable with each other.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
teehee...Zrina...pally...friend...YOU CAN HAVE YOUR FUCKING COOKIES AND ANYTHING ESLE YOU WANT IF YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE LIKE YOU JUST DID! Hot freaking damn girl....that was...A-FUCKING-MAZING...FUCK!
Seriously though...i am so addicted to this it's sick. I think you from the bottom of my ero-sennin heart for your time and talent in doing this fic.
JA NA!
SeveredWings
Seriously though...i am so addicted to this it's sick. I think you from the bottom of my ero-sennin heart for your time and talent in doing this fic.
JA NA!
SeveredWings
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I've missed so many chapters . . . they were all great. Loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, I think you really present them in a way that is very on character. The whole clone scene was just too much. I had to lay my head down and get control of my laughter before I could continue to read. "The warden's back, act natural." Way my favorite then all the clone transforming back into Naruto and all of them acting like little kids trying to hide what they had been doing from an adult was a great laugh. The sex scene between them in the next chapter was wonderfully done too, even the begining dealing with oral sex was a great laugh. Naruto telling him he was planning on making an appointment for a later day was so funny. The end of the chapter was touching also, Sasuke can now feel the bond between them becoming stronger. Can't wait to see where that leads them. Thanks for sharing this story with everyone, I'll keep a look out for more from you. Take care.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i looooooooooove the way you write! I have read a lot of naruto fanfiction in my time, but i think that yours is one of the best. I eagerly await your next installment.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS POWERFUL!! I loved it!!! The description was superb and everything...i'm at a loss for words. I don't even know where to start. Maybe when i regroup i'll leave another review and pount out what i liked but i liked it ALL. Especially the very last paragraph on what Sasuke was inwardly thinking in the afterglow. No moe denial. YAY!!!!!!!! Good job. Update real soon!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nyah!!!! That was one really hot line of lemons!!1 I love it! I love it! So well written... so typically Sasuke and Naruto! Interesting how well you show Naruto's loneliness and his need for companionship, as well as Sasuke's stubborn refusal against his feelings for his dobe and the clash of their wills... it is a pleasure to read this... nyah!! so update when you can... I know how to wait.. I swear!!! XD