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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
happy birthday to me, happy birthday to me... kyaaaaa, what a hot, yummy, and insanely intense birthday present!! and i finished reading it just in time lol *dances in glee* ahhh that was soooooo good, so worth the wait. omg, i loved it so much! and i can't even begin to tell you how hot it is to me that sasuke likes being "submissive" (even KNOWS he likes it but refuses to admit it!) god that is so hot. thank you thank you thank you!! and the end, with naruto thinking how much he loved sasuke and sasuke realizing he couldn't deny their bond.. kyaaa, ack i can't wait for tuesday!!!!!!!!!!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whats up! I love where this chap is going. I have waited patiently for this! I read this last chap rather late because i was out of town but i had to leave a review anyway of course. The clones part made me laugh. It sounds exactly like something Naruto would do. And that part about Sasuke realizing Naruto was probably lonely was rather sweet. It's alot like Sasuke to think these things rather then say them.
I noticed the smallest of errors that you might wanna fix up here. In that last paragraph you wrote “Mmm, as much as I don’t want to interrupted you, why don’t we...ect. ect." You probably meant interrupt. Anyway, just wanted to point that out. I don't know why i always catch these things *shrugs*. Can't wait till the next update. No seriously. I can't wait lol!!
I noticed the smallest of errors that you might wanna fix up here. In that last paragraph you wrote “Mmm, as much as I don’t want to interrupted you, why don’t we...ect. ect." You probably meant interrupt. Anyway, just wanted to point that out. I don't know why i always catch these things *shrugs*. Can't wait till the next update. No seriously. I can't wait lol!!
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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
I want to glomp you be I keep on hiting the computer screen. I love how well developed this whole plot is and the great emotion you've put in it. I've seen some stories where Naruto leaves with Sasuke but has amnesia or is under the influence of a potion or something. It's really rare to see one where he willingly leaves Konoha and helps Sasuke. I think the sealing of ORochimaru was especially a nice touch. I really hope that snake stays sealed however. Anyway I've really enjoyed reading this. I sort of stumbled onto this fanfic and was intrigued. I then proceded to nearly kill myself to read all of it. It's VERY addictive. I'll try to recomend it to my friends but unlike me they read EXTREMELY slowly so they might just faint or collapse at the sight of such a long fanfic. Can't say I didn't try. Anyway Onegai update this! IT'S WONDERFUL.
PS. I'll be reading Wrong Number after I recuperate. Thank you for writing such a great story and thanks again for reading this ridiculously long review for everything you've written.
Aki WildQueen
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
I want to glomp you be I keep on hiting the computer screen. I love how well developed this whole plot is and the great emotion you've put in it. I've seen some stories where Naruto leaves with Sasuke but has amnesia or is under the influence of a potion or something. It's really rare to see one where he willingly leaves Konoha and helps Sasuke. I think the sealing of ORochimaru was especially a nice touch. I really hope that snake stays sealed however. Anyway I've really enjoyed reading this. I sort of stumbled onto this fanfic and was intrigued. I then proceded to nearly kill myself to read all of it. It's VERY addictive. I'll try to recomend it to my friends but unlike me they read EXTREMELY slowly so they might just faint or collapse at the sight of such a long fanfic.
PS. I'll be reading Wrong Number after I recuperate. Thank you for writing such a great story and thanks again for reading this ridiculously long review for everything you've written.
Aki WildQueen
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know, that I LOVE this fic. It's actually the only reason I keep regularly coming back to AFF. ^__^
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!
The funny scenes, the everyone wanted to be Shikamaru but no one wanted to be Gai or Lee!!! The Sakura and Ino scene was just to priceless! I love this story! And I can't wait until your next update! Now I have to go to class, it starts in 10mins!
Hugs and Kisses
Shosuro
The funny scenes, the everyone wanted to be Shikamaru but no one wanted to be Gai or Lee!!! The Sakura and Ino scene was just to priceless! I love this story! And I can't wait until your next update! Now I have to go to class, it starts in 10mins!
Hugs and Kisses
Shosuro
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeee *squeals in anticipation* omg i can't wait for next chapter, such a yummy tease to lead into it!! and the rest of the chapter--omg i was laughing so much! starting with a giggle from sasuke saying "that's my line" to straight out CRACKING UP
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dammit, stupid weird keyboard.. somehow i sent before i meant to.. what i get for using my husband's comp, ne.. anyway *ahem* (picking up where i left off..) i was straight up CRACKING UP at naruto's clones' antics with deciding who would henge into whoever, the fight about not wanting to be gai or lee until naruto promised they didn't have to follow through on any crazy pledges, no one being allowed to be shika, kakashi-clone's haphazard cleaning while reading icha icha, jiraiya-clone's "research", sakura and ino-clones' sasuke attack *lmao* haha, even the "warden" line was hilarious to me.. and then ahhhh you're still able to move smoothly from that to naruto showering and sasuke suavely offering to help, knowing what he intended it to lead to *woot* i can't wait for saturday again!! *dances in anticipation*
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, nice chapter. I can't wait till the lemony goodness (hopefully) continues in the next!
Thanks for sharing your talent, keep it up!
Thanks for sharing your talent, keep it up!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHH ThE HOrrOR! How can you leave it there?! *Pouts*...You must hate us...*sniffle sniffle*...That's gotta be it...right?
*Fumbles with an over full platter of chocolate chip cookies...warm from the oven*...and to think...I baked this in honour of yummy smut with everyones favorite boys! WAAAAAAA....NOW WHAT DO I DO WITH HOT COOKIES AND NO YOAI?!
teehee...
*Fumbles with an over full platter of chocolate chip cookies...warm from the oven*...and to think...I baked this in honour of yummy smut with everyones favorite boys! WAAAAAAA....NOW WHAT DO I DO WITH HOT COOKIES AND NO YOAI?!
teehee...
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That cliff hanger broke my heart. It just stopped. Right there. Just stopped! I have never hated three letters (TBC) so much before in my life! I had to laugh at myself. I know the expression on my face was hilarious. Anyway....
I have to thank you for putting this image in my head. [Neji was scrubbing the wall muttering, “It is my fate to get every stone perfectly clean.”] It's so funny yet, I would love to see post-time Neji scrubbing a wall (he would get raped)!
I'm so excited about the next chapter...and to think I had just started writing the next chapter to "You're Mine", and I had to stop to read this. The henge clones were a nice effect. I do kind of wish he made one of Shika and Gaara though, I understand why he decided against making one of the lazy boy...lol. Oh well! You rock as always!
I have to thank you for putting this image in my head. [Neji was scrubbing the wall muttering, “It is my fate to get every stone perfectly clean.”] It's so funny yet, I would love to see post-time Neji scrubbing a wall (he would get raped)!
I'm so excited about the next chapter...and to think I had just started writing the next chapter to "You're Mine", and I had to stop to read this. The henge clones were a nice effect. I do kind of wish he made one of Shika and Gaara though, I understand why he decided against making one of the lazy boy...lol. Oh well! You rock as always!