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Oh now that’s just cruel! That has got to be one of the most evil cliffhangers I have ever had the torture of reading. You have got to update soon. Regardless of that though, I would just like to say that the part about Naruto changing his clones into other people was very funny and clever. It was a nice touch as this point in the story.

Also, I think I need to restate something I said in my last review for I fear that it came out wrong. I would just like to clarify that I am fully aware that people don’t change just because they have fallen in love. However, I have noticed that authors have the tendency to change their characters once said previous phenomenon does occur. Therefore, I only made the prior comment about hoping that Sasuke would not become a bowl of mush more so as a gentle reminder than anything else. I haven’t read much else by you so I don’t know how you handle your characters with different emotions, or how you choose to portray them in different situations. Granted that I have been thoroughly impressed with your writing style, plot-line, and characters portrayals, I simply wanted to state a concern of mine as a reader. Anyway though, I just wanted to clarify that.

In regards to the chapter itself, you were true to your word and you have a very realistic sense of people and the reasons behind their actions; which is why I still really enjoy the story as whole and also your portrayal of Sasuke’s character. I didn’t want to write you a book though so I’ll stop here. My best wishes for you and your writing.

yeach! finally! some good hot sex! who will be bottom?

that's the most evil cliffhanger ever!

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is this going where i think this is going? i think so-oh! this chapter was super great. i can't wait till saturday for an update. and i absolutely loved the whole bit with the clones. i was laughing so much... to myself. i don't want my roommates to think i'm crazy. @>_____________________<@

Ooooooooo I can't wait!!!! Another wonderful chapter that you have added. So funny with the girls finding Sasuke, You know, that so like Naruto to be creative enough to make DoubleGangers of his freinds. Very smart in adding that in there. -Kirai

Lol, I loved the part with the role-playing clones and the Sakura and Ino ones that attacked Sasuke.

Ooer, the ending of this chapter holds many promises. Can't wait till you update agan!

Great job!

Wow I can't wait for the next chapter!

that was so freaking funny. that was a great idea to have him chaange the clones into people he knew and act like them to clean. i was dying laughing. i can't wait for another great update.

I LOVED that chapter. Seriously from start to finish I was grinning like an idiot, and for simple shit too, which makes me love it even more. I Totally agree with Naruto gaping at Sasuke is a DAMN good reason to stand around anywhere, and that bit with the clones - that is sooo Naruto it's Ridiculous :). It reminds me of him making clones to play with the bells at that shrine with Jiraiya (cause DUH one Naruto isn't enough to play with two bells! - "Sandaime? Kichi kichi?"), He's so Adorable, I love that gaki. This was so great,I can't even bring myself to be the slightest bit put out about the cliffie, I mean come on *SQUEEE* Finally, MAN SMEX!!! XD, Can't wait for Saturday!!!!

i would like to say that your story has really got me thinking on some things i really liked it had some pertty funny things in there and i would also have to say it really shocked me when Orochi-bitch took over naruto now that had me wondering what in the wrold! how this happen? but after reading some it had thinking hu? would have never seen that coming so any ways i enjoyed your story ^^ so far i hope there's a chapter 27 soon and so on plus i olny hope to see naur and sasu back in there come town soon after they take care of what they need to do i also find it very aumes how you made sasuke so jeloes over naruto when sai found them hehe great job on that XD well i look forward to a nother new chapter soon *saves to fav's*